Archwing Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Alright! Here are a few golems cards ive been working on. I might add more later >_> depends on if this gets any comments.Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 monster card from your hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every Zombie-Type card in your Graveyard.Lore:This card is also treated as a Rock-Type. When this card is Normal Summoned, select and equip 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to this card and treat it as an Equip Spell Card. This card gains ATK equal to half of the equipped monsters ATK points.Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned.This card is also treated as a Rock-Type. As long as this card remains on the field decrease the ATK of all Aqua-Type monsters by 400 points and increase their DEF by 300 points. Not my best but oh well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 "sending a monster card from your hand to the Graveyard" = "discarding 1 Monster Card." Not bad, First card: The image is alright and the OCG is decent. It could be good support with the discard effect, but I would lower the DEF a bit to fit the Zombie-Type. It seems to be bordering on overpowered, but only turns out to be a beatstick so it is fine. Second card: Personally I like this image better, and the OCG is fine. Not a very creative effect, but it seems balanced. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 OCG Fix1) This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 monster card from your hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every monster card in your Graveyard. When this card destroys a Zombie-Type monster increase its DEF by 200. The gain affect could be very OP. Maybe saying every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard. 2) This card is also treated as a Rock-Type. When this card is Normal Summoned, select and equip 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to this card and treat it as an Equip Spell Card. This card gains ATK equal to half of the equipped monsters ATK points.______________________________________________________________________________ I really like the affects.I think the pictures are flawless and are a fan of them.Minor OCG errors just check into what I wrote.Great effort.8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Alright,thank you both ill fix it as soon as i can.Okay they are fixed + i added frost Golem. (Im sure he has some sort of OCG problem too >_>) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 1st golem is very easy to summon and its effect is bland, give it another one the other two have balanced effects, so this gets 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Frost Golem says its treated as a rock type when it is a rock type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Again with a Great Picture!Minor Grammar errors not even anything to worry about.OCG is good.Effect is too simple for me though, seems dull.Good effort.Overall (New Card)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Frost Golem says its treated as a rock type when it is a rock type. Ah sorry about that. It was "Frost Gremlin" at first and was a fiend-type instead of a rock type >_> ill fix it later though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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