edited dragon type monster

[DDthundergx]

this is my edited version of my dragon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Flaring Rose]

Pleze Write the effect out, and the pic is overused

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

Pleze Write the effect out' date='

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I agree

 

and the pic is overused

.....IDIOT.

Pics are usually overused because it's really good or suits the card. AND WHO CARES ABOUT OVERUSED PICS??? I thought you'd be bright for something who joined a few months back.

[Spire]

It actually seems underpowered considering the summoning requirments and that it will take a while to get it's ATK up. But better under then over. =]

[ragnarok1945]

write out the lore, I can barely read it, and change the pic to a less overused one

 

7/10 on pic

[KdogPrime]

write out the lore' date=' I can barely read it, and change the pic to a less overused one

 

7/10 on pic

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Holy crap, does everyone have myopia on this forum? You can barely read that? Seriously? Wow, your eyes must suck.

 

I wear glasses and I can read that perfectly without squinting.

 

I like the picture. I don't care if it's over-used. Let's take a crack at fixing that effect.

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Spellcaster Type Monsters

If this card is face-up on your side of the field during your Standby Phase, it permenently gains 500 ATK and 250 DEF. If a monster on your side of the field is destroyed by battle, the damage to your Life Points is halved.

 

A novel idea for an effect. It might be a little hard to keep on the field long enough for it to really power up. Maybe an addition effect to protect itself might be helpful.

 

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

no one wants to squint, that's all. I had to squint slightly to read it myself.

[Chex]

Just major OCG errors on this card. The effect is fine and well balanced though but might be a bit underpowered for a monster that requires 3 monsters to be synchroed in order to synchro summon this card. 7/10

[Wolfbat Master]

6.4/10 *yawn*

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Spellcaster Type Monsters

The ATK of this card is equal to the number of Standby Phases while this card is on the field x500 and DEF x250. If a monster you control is destroyed by battle, the battle damage inflicted to your Life Points is halved.

 

I may be wrong. And I'm sure this is UP'd.

[Tam555]

Kapucho Kininiwa-Garcon mayawiai maiawia conifgawa shamlamo

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

Kapucho Kininiwa-Garcon mayawiai maiawia conifgawa shamlamo

And is that a language? Spam? Or both?

[Shocked]

Work more on the OCG.

 

6.7/10

[Jolta]

Good enough.

[Firewizz]

heres mine

 

:shock: :shock:

[Spirit of DMG]

heres the thing: the only time posting your cards in other peoples threads is acceptable is in the contest section.

as far as the card thats supposed to be here, aside from major OCG errors (corrected above) and being UP'ed, its pretty good, perhaps give it 1000 base ATK, and it'll be good. 4/10 until its fixed.