meatsheild41 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Okay, this is my first posted card, and the art isn't mine, so I'd like to thank whoever made it (you know who you are). Feel free to comment and rate (this is what this post is for, anyways). Effect:1 Light Tuner Monster + 1 or more Dark Non- Tuner MonstersDuring the Battle Phase, this card is also treated as a Warrior- type Monster. When this card battles a Dark Monster, neither player can activate any card effects until the end of the Damage Step. Any Dragon- type Monster battling this card is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Not bad for your first card, the image is pretty good and the OCG isn't too bad. The effect seems balanced, however I would lower it to a Level 8 and lower the ATK accordingly. Just to make it more playable and more worth Synchro Summoning. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hentrik Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Great pic, OCG is ok, but a bit OP'd since it's quite powerful and easy to summon.8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 ok great for a first. some OCG errors1 LIGHT Tuner Monster + 1 or more DARK Non- Tuner MonstersDuring the Battle Phase, this card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. When this card battles a DARK monster, neither player can activate any card effects until the end of the Damage Step. Any Dragon-Type monster battling this card is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. ~8.7/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Seems a Bit Basic, maybe Expand the effect? Also maybe lower ATk to 2700? OCG Fix Anyway;1 LIGHT Tuner Monster + 1 or more DARK Non-Tuner MonstersDuring the Battle Phase, this card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. When this card battles a DARK Monster, neither player can activate any card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. All Dragon-type Monsters that battle this card is destroyed at the end of the Battle Phase. Change it please, Nothing else I see wrong, good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyraelCooldaras Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Its looks pretty awesome, I enjoy the pic alot actually. Everything looks ok... (if not, then I have bad eye sight) I give this card a 9 out of 10. Good luck on your other cards! Hope we could see them soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13fh04135cb Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koa'ki Meiru Master Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Okay' date=' this is my first posted card, and the art isn't mine, so I'd like to thank whoever made it (you know who you are). Feel free to comment and rate (this is what this post is for, anyways). [img']http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/5271/382440.jpg[/img] Effect:1 Light Tuner Monster + 1 or more Dark Non- Tuner MonstersDuring the Battle Phase, this card is also treated as a Warrior- type Monster. When this card battles a Dark Monster, neither player can activate any card effects until the end of the Damage Step. Any Dragon- type Monster battling this card is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. This is a pretty good card. I have to give it a 8.5/10 If you have any questions, contact me. Ko'ki Meiru :)Okay' date=' this is my first posted card, and the art isn't mine, so I'd like to thank whoever made it (you know who you are). Feel free to comment and rate (this is what this post is for, anyways). [img']http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/5271/382440.jpg[/img] Effect:1 Light Tuner Monster + 1 or more Dark Non- Tuner MonstersDuring the Battle Phase, this card is also treated as a Warrior- type Monster. When this card battles a Dark Monster, neither player can activate any card effects until the end of the Damage Step. Any Dragon- type Monster battling this card is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. This is a pretty good card. I have to give it a 8.5/10 If you have any questions, contact me. Ko'ki Meiru Master :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexta McSignals Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 cool card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 I like the idea behind the card. And for the two people who gave OCG fixes, the ones you gave aren't even fully correct. *sigh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 good for new menber!8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meatsheild41 Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Okay, all fixed up. I just lowered its ATK, really. Everything else is the same (the OCG was fixed, too). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 effect is very good for a first card, the OCG looks reasonable too 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Methinks Michael is spelled incorrectly. Okay for a first card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Official Jerk of YCM Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 how do i make a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryno Dorcus Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 how do i make a card At the top of the screen thier is a button, called Card Maker. Click on it and then fill in the slots down the side. Also this card is good. Pic is cool. OCG is well done and yeh that pretty much it. 9\10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meatsheild41 Posted September 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 There, I fixed the name (no other changes). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 It's not too bad, the effect seems fine and balanced overall a really nice picture to go along with it. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[email protected] Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 My only problem is that the pic shows more then one monster. Even though it's clearly fetureing the guy in the middle, the darker monsters on the side are unneeded. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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