awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 [align=center]Remove the Cheat![spoiler=Lore]When a monster is Special Summoned, remove that card from play and negate the card's effect. Return the removed from play card to the owner's hand 2 turns after this card's effect was activated. The owner then draws 1 card. If a card with the same name as another card removed from play by this card's effect 2 times or more, it is not returned to the owner's hand and the owner does not draw 1 card. Enjoy the card. Please leave feedback and a rating. My own edits are in italics.[/align]Image credit to Koramore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Review please. BUMP because somehow this ended up near the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 nice way to get a powerful monster out of the picture for good, looks balanced enough to get 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 nice way to get a powerful monster out of the picture for good' date=' looks balanced enough to get 8/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rating. Just wondering, do you think the name fits the effect/picture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 it does to me, looks like a student caught another student red handed or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 it does to me' date=' looks like a student caught another student red handed or something[/quote'] Actually I was thinking a bit of a casino dealer catching a card-counter or such. Again thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Bump! Please review. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Meh, the Effect is somewhat confusing and the pic sucks, exclamation marks in card names don't look so good. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 You should specify when exactly the card is returned - which Phase I mean.Also make it more clear is it only opponent's monster or could be even yours. (Could be useful too.)But generally speaking - if you clarify those two points - it could get 9/10 at least.I mean the effect is way cool - but not sure whether it could be considered a bit OP'ed.Or maybe not. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 The cards is quite useful and cool. I give you....Dan Dan Dan! 10/10! Meh' date=' the Effect is somewhat confusing and the pic sucks[/quote']That's the correct OCG as far as I know. I know cards whose pics don't suit the card (Real cards) but I won't name them. I don't care if you joined a year or so ago, you definitely aren't used to stuff like this aren't you? I bet you don't even have a proper card to look at or doesn't even know what Yugioh Wikia is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bionclex Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 I liked the name xDyeah somehow Special summoning can be considered cheating on the rules :p Good card, OCG needs fix but Im too lazy to fix it now8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 brilliant idea for a cardfairly balanced and i really like the picturewith a bit more thought and effort it could be a perfect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 The cards is quite useful and cool. I give you....Dan Dan Dan! 10/10! Meh' date=' the Effect is somewhat confusing and the pic sucks[/quote']That's the correct OCG as far as I know. I know cards whose pics don't suit the card (Real cards) but I won't name them. I don't care if you joined a year or so ago, you definitely aren't used to stuff like this aren't you? I bet you don't even have a proper card to look at or doesn't even know what Yugioh Wikia is. Listen kiddo, I didn't say the OCG was wrong, I said the WHOLE effect was confusing, the whole effect is vague not the OCG, next time you wanna criticize make sure you read the comment correctly. And you talk in that tone to me once more and you'll c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 The cards is quite useful and cool. I give you....Dan Dan Dan! 10/10! Meh' date=' the Effect is somewhat confusing and the pic sucks[/quote']That's the correct OCG as far as I know. I know cards whose pics don't suit the card (Real cards) but I won't name them. I don't care if you joined a year or so ago, you definitely aren't used to stuff like this aren't you? I bet you don't even have a proper card to look at or doesn't even know what Yugioh Wikia is. Listen kiddo, I didn't say the OCG was wrong, I said the WHOLE effect was confusing, the whole effect is vague not the OCG, next time you wanna criticize make sure you read the comment correctly. And you talk in that tone to me once more and you'll c.What tone? I don't even talk in tones. So you're saying that he could have simplified this? You could have said that in the...*counts*7th place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Meh' date=' the Effect is somewhat confusing and the pic sucks, exclamation marks in card names don't look so good. 5.5/10[/quote'] http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/A_Rival_Appears! I think that the OCG is top quality, the pic fits the theme and it's balanced.Definetly a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 stopping Special Summoned Monsters...I hate this idea^^STOP OP'd SYNCHROS!..not those nice Special Summoned Monsters =( xD But your card is nice^^(even if its not great) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3Ms Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Good counter to Stardust Dragon, or any Synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 It was good until I looked at the last sentence. Any way I interpreted it, I still couldn't understand it. I have no idea what that means, the words don't connect in my head, so I will rate you based on what I can understand. Uh... Very useful card, it will definately come in hand when your opponent is trying to get something good easily, or trying to get in an extra summon. 9.8/10, cause nothing's perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JimmieIII Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Sounds like a great and innovative card effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Bad OCG at te last effect. Other than that its a good card but the name isnt too YuGiOh-ish :/The pic is good but does NOT fit the card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Bad OCG at te last effect. Other than that its a good card but the name isnt too YuGiOh-ish :/The pic is good but does NOT fit the card. 7/10That's it in a nutshell, especially since that is a Phoenix Wright picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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