Legend Zero Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 I've had this for awhile but just now got the finishing touches. It was originally a gift for someone on another forum but I've added new things. CnC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Low novice. Depth is dead. Bad focal and focal placement. Could you at least adjust the colors a bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Low novice. Expected Depth is dead. Expected Bad focal and focal placement. No Could you at least adjust the colors a bit? No' date=' adjusting colors is bad for blending[/b'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Bad focal and focal placement. No Yes. You have practically two focals that are placed rather poorly. Could you at least adjust the colors a bit? No' date=' adjusting colors is bad for blending[/b'] Not if you do it right. Either that or before you start a tag open up a high quality color wheel and select some nice colors. Everything in this tag is quite washed out and bland, which doesn't compliment the colors the focal has at all. Why are some things transparent? I just looked at it again and I'm getting kind of annoyed. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 You have two focals. And they both failed the Rule of Thirds. The C4D's don't mean anything. They're just dumped there for no reason. The right side is random. People wonder why it's random. Well whatever. It's a gift. Gifts need not be class'd for obvious reasons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 To much C4D (imo) I like it for the most part though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 I agree with raiN Do something to the depth, focal and colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Double Focal = Bad. At least until you get at least High Mod or something, depends. I kinda like the C4D's, but riht is just random. Low Novice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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