thanonyx Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 In the Arcana Force archetype some of the major arcanum are missing. I made some of the ones that are missing but this one is my favorite, especially because of the cool picture. Lore: If this card is in the graveyard when monsters are destroyed they are removed from play instead of going to the graveyard. When this card is Summoned, toss a coin: ● Heads: For every monster in both graveyards this card gains 100 ATK and DEF points ● Tails: For every monster in both graveyards this card loses 100 ATK and DEF points. The 13th arcana, Death. Death doesn't mean bad things, it means change. The death of one cycle and the birth of a new one, but in this card's case the dying cycle is your opponent's winning streak and the cycle being born is your winning streak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 OCG Fix: While this card is in your Graveyard, any card sent to the Graveyard is removed from play instead. "graveyards" should be capitalized. I think you need a drawback, because with "Second Coin Toss" or "Reversal of Fate" this card can become very powerful. Make it Level 7, or add a drawback. Pic is nice. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 It needs some drawbacks, right now the effects are good, but Oped 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted September 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 I know it's kind of OP'ed but one tribute to the doomed, raigeki break, dark core, D.D. Warrior, etc. and it's out of here. At least I didn't give it spell, trap, or effect immunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 It is overpowered especially when you destroy it and send it to the graveyard because neither you or your opponent will have any monsters in the graveyard that come after the death of this card into the graveyard and this card can easily help make a burn deck cheap especially when your trying to stall them from being able to summon monsters from their graveyards. This card does need some drawbacks. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 What if I made it so you had to pay LP to attack? Would that make it balanced? If so, how much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 i'd make it level 7and make it so that it can't be special summonnedalso it only gets its "remove from play" when it is sent from the field to the graveyardthat way it's slightly more situational Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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