Jolta Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Here's my Deck, Inspired by the Spider it's based on. [spoiler=Tuners] [spoiler=Effect] [spoiler=Synchros] Hope you like this! I MAY create a Brown Recluse Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Ho boy. 1. "Out-of-play zone"? Don't you mean "Removed from play"?2. Black Widow's Kiss is overpowered. Taking control of your opponent's monsters like that should have a hefty cost attached. Look at cards like Mirror Wall, or Snatch Steal. All of them require you to pay a high price.3. Black Widow Trooper is far to easy to summon for monster with his stats, nevermind his effect. You also failed to specify how the Trooper destroyed his opponent's monster to gain his effect of summoning more black widow monsters. 4. Surprisingly, Black Widow Steed has about the most balanced effect of all these cards. It might require a little tweaking, but it's not too bad. The pictures...yeah, we'll leave those alone. I think I understand why you made your own. I think that you missed the point of Black Widows. They eat their mates. A good idea for these cards would be to provide powerful effect that come with a heavy cost, or the possibly of a heavy cost. Jirai Gumo is a spider monster with a powerful effect, but the possibility of something devastating. You might also want to consider using effects that require you to tribute monsters on the field to use Black Widow card effects (eating their mates), then creating a couple cards that could return those tributed monsters to your deck or hand so they aren't lost completely. You have a way to go, but this is only a first effort. Try again and keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Yup, I did mean removed from play. And Black Widow Dragon (BWD) is supposed to be overpowered. I SHOULD add a regular Black Widow Spider... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Work on your drawing please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Drawing... Which part? I could change the eye arrangements of that Dragon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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