Some Random Cards

[Kadashi]

A failing try to get me back on the cardmaking horse!>.>

 

Anyways,some pics might be overused,dunno,here they are.All pics found on photobucket.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll try to keep this thread somewhat updated.

[Chex]

You got OCG errors. Also, Follower of the Dark Flames is a great attempt at trying to make a copy of Command Knights but they're too weak to even be considered good; you should boost them up more with ATK and DEF but not to the point of that it's equivalent to those that are high hitters or high defenders. Messenger of Death is alright of a card except 1800 ATK hitters that are 4 stars are outdated nowadays unless you just want to make that card for fun like that. Hantus, the Dragon of Mass Destruction is way too cheap and needs to be tweaked down by both ATK and effect. You should consider changing the effect: "Once this card is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy all monsters on the field" to some other effect that is a lot less cheap. Also, for its special summon conditions you should specify whether that's the only way to special summon this card or if that's just one way to spcial summon this card from your hand and also increase the special summon conditions to 3 Dragon type monsters since 2 is a pretty small amount of dragon type monsters required to be removed from play. Overall, they aren't bad except that last card, its WAY too overpowered. 8/10

[Kadashi]

Thanks.And you're right about Hantus,it is a bit op,so I raised the number of Special Summon conditions and decreased his ATK by little,hope it's somewhat better now!

 

Edit:Added 2 cards.

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG errors you can use the OCG thread to help you. Card 5's pic is overused, the 4th card needs an effect

 

7.9/10

[CeDeFiA]

The last card is Ridley D=