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My Sonic set


Sonic maker#1

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ok ill label the cards 1, 2, 3 and 4 and put my opinion forward

 

1:Alot of OCG errors and the effect of sonic isnt clear. it should read:

 

"Once per turn, during your Standby phaise, if "Green Hill Zone" is face up on the field add 1 "Partner Token" onto this card (3 max). When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponents lifepoints, you may sacrifice 3 "Partner Tokens" to special summon "Miles 'Tails' Prower" from your hand or deck.

 

2: The Tails card is alot better. its effect makes sense and its effect is good. You only need to add a few more capital letters like on "sabotage token" ect. and its good to go ;)

 

3: Hudge errors in your wording on that. Also "Toon" cards usually have the same attack and defence as their non-toon version.

 

4: Hedgehog doesnt have a capital letter, neither does Fox. thats about it. nice and simple :)

 

Overall Score: 5/10 - Nice attempt but just some things to fix up. very good to say your a rookie :). im new too so i know how hard it would be :P

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