Serene Eternity Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 This is my first Machine-Type card. I hope you enjoy it. Dark Mech GangogarEffect: Once per turn, if this card is in face-up Defense Position, you can Special Summon 1 "Dark Mech Gangogar" from you hand in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect was activated. During the End Phase of the turn this card's effect was activated, destroy all face-up "Dark Mech Gangogar" Special Summoned by this card's effect. Any and All Advice is Welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I'm starting to think your not new...this is really good. Only thing i found was 'you' is 'your'. But that's extremely minor and a common mistake. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Eternity Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Hmm? What makes me seem as if I am not new? And thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Hmm? What makes me seem as if I am not new? And thank you very much. ...Because you are pretty good at card making. I think this one is overpowered though, for a Level 4, you can do 2000 DEF or 1900 ATK, not both. Maye make it a Level 5, or lower the ATK and DEF. Could be a useful card though, a pretty good swarm effect and brings out monsters that could be used as tributes. The OCG is fine, and the image is pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I don't know, jus the fact that a 1-Star Member doesn't normally have such flawless OCG.... <.< 9/10 Quite impressive, but it is a little, OVP'd through Statistic-Wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Eternity Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Hmm...Thank you I shall take the advice into account and fix the card. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 All right!Great pic, good effect, nice job!Overall rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 lower the stats a bit and you're good to go 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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