Serene Eternity Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Another new Machine-Type monster. I hope that you enjoy it. Elegant Cyber DancerEffect:During your opponent's Battle Phase, your opponent take 200 points of damage for each Spell and Trap Card you control. When this card is destroyed by battle, if you take 500 points of damage or more, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each Spell Card you control. All advice is welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 =O Your really good at this. If I had more reps to give I'd rep you again. 10/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckShuffler711 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 It's a card that beats an opponent down, until destruction, then does so one final time.I love it. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Eternity Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thank you both very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Wow that's............ 1000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 very nice effectI think it's 10/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 A fab card for a new member 10/10 for u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 quite impressive burn effect, I'd definately use it 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 good burn effect. the girl in the image is great however I dont quite fancy the background but theres nothing to do aboiut that ^^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Your OCG is good but I just want to fix sumething ^.^: (During your opponent's Battle Phase, your opponent take 200 points of damage for each Spell and Trap Card you control. When this card is destroyed by battle *and you took 500 points of damage or more from the difference*, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each Spell Card you control.) I don't know if this is better 0.0. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Your OCG is good but I just want to fix sumething ^.^: (During your opponent's Battle Phase' date=' your opponent take 200 points of damage for each Spell and Trap Card you control. When this card is destroyed by battle *and took 500 points of damage or more*, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each Spell Card you control.) I don't know if this is better 0.0. 9/10[/quote'] >> Mizz Serene's version is actually more correct. And easier to understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Really -.-, I am sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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