jayjack Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 If this card is removed from play, by removing 5 monsters in your graveyard, Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned this way, draw 3 cards. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card, you can Special Summon 1 monster removed from play. OCG Fix (Thanks to ~ P O L A R I S ~):If this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 5 monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, draw 3 cards. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Excellent pic. The effect is good for D.D. Slight OCG errors. 9/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Nice pic. OCG errors. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 You need more restrictions so its special summon effect of other monsters that are removed from play. You can easily remove like a Jinzo along with 4 other monsters to special summon this card and then use its effect to bring back Jinzo to your side of the field. I'd suggest having level limit to a special summon by this way to lvl 4 monsters or lower to reduce its cheapness. Also, drawing 3 cards from being special summoned that wy is just plain cheap, you're best off eliminating that effect or reducing it down to 1 card that you can draw. Right now, the card is overpowered and could use some tweaking to weaken it down. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 OCG: If this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 5 monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, draw 3 cards. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monsters. Balance: 3 cards? Other than that, it's competitive, but not too good. Make it 1 card and it's good. Details: The Card Maker messes up "1st Edition" by making it block caps. Use "Limited Edition" as circulation or leave it blank. Set ID should have "EN" before the suffix and a four letter prefix, so I'd suggest "JAYJ-EN001". Serial code should be 8 random digits. You're doing well, keep up the pace and consider advice and you'll do well here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Very good, Tracer Bullet. Can you PM me the pic and tell me where you got it from?Want to be friends?Overall rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 You need more restrictions so its special summon effect of other monsters that are removed from play. You can easily remove like a Jinzo along with 4 other monsters to special summon this card and then use its effect to bring back Jinzo to your side of the field. I'd suggest having level limit to a special summon by this way to lvl 4 monsters or lower to reduce its cheapness. Also' date=' drawing 3 cards from being special summoned that wy is just plain cheap, you're best off eliminating that effect or reducing it down to 1 card that you can draw. Right now, the card is overpowered and could use some tweaking to weaken it down. 6/10[/quote'] Ever heard of "The Creator". It's a monster that allows you to special summon monsters from your graveyard by discarding 1 card. This is basically the same thing except monsters removed from play. Now, the 1st effect is an optional effect. A way to special summon it quickly to the field. Removing monsters in the graveyard in the process. Drawing 3 cards is an added bonus. The real trick is getting it removed from play and having 5 monsters in your graveyard, which is hard in a d.d. deck.Very good' date=' Tracer Bullet. Can you PM me the pic and tell me where you got it from?Want to be friends?Overall rating: 9/10[/quote'] Found it in DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 OCG is only slightly off, effect is well balanced out 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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