Taichi Masaki Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 [spoiler=Red-Eyes Hybrid][spoiler=[b]Effect[/b]]While this card is face-up on the field, it is also treated as Warrior-type monster. Increase the ATK of this monster by 200 for each "Red-Eyes" monster and Warrior-type monster on the field. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with a monster with the same ATK. [spoiler=Red-Eyes Robot Dragon][spoiler=[b]Effect[/b]]While this card is face-up on the field, it is also treated as Machine-type monster. Once per turn, select one monster your opponent controls. That monster cannot attack until the end of your opponents next turn. [spoiler=Red-Eyes Orochi Dragon][spoiler=[b]Effect[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Dragon-Type monster on the field and in the Graveyard from play. This card cannot attack directly. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is sent to the graveyard, inflict 3000 life points to your opponent, then remove this card from play. This effect cannot be negated or chained to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 1: Meh2: Better than 13: Utterly Pointless Total = 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thanks for the rating.Why do you think the third's pointless? Edit: Took out the "When this card is Summoned pay half your life points." part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 The 1st one has a pretty original effect, so i kinda like it. 2nd is a copy of blizzard dragon but can by a machine too, sorta dull. Third is pretty much useless. Can't attack and its destroyed in 3 turns. Its more of a temporary wall monster. Half your lp? Hardy worth summoning and its summoning req. are hard unless you run a tight red-eyes deck. The only thing it really does it take a large bite out of your opponent's LP.5/10, 7/10 if you exclude the last card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 The 1st one has a pretty original effect' date=' so i kinda like it. 2nd is a copy of blizzard dragon but can by a machine too, sorta dull. Third is pretty much useless. Can't attack and its destroyed in 3 turns. Its more of a temporary wall monster. Half your lp? Hardy worth summoning and its summoning req. are hard unless you run a tight red-eyes deck. The only thing it really does it take a large bite out of your opponent's LP.5/10, 7/10 if you exclude the last card.[/quote'] Just took out the "Half your Life points" part. Is it better? How about if I put two dragons or two darks instead of two red-eyes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I have some time, so I will do an eyeofthedeck on them. [spoiler=eyeofthedeck] [spoiler=Red-Eyes Hybrid] Name is pretty good. Suits the effect. Stats are alright too. Like a weaker version of Kaiser Glider. Picture needs improvement or a new one altogether. Too blurry and dark. OCG is pretty god, just a few capitalization errors. 7.3/10. [spoiler=Red-Eyes Robot Dragon] Nice name. Could be better (something like "Red-Eyes Dragon-Mech"). Stats are good too. The picture needs improving. OCG is alright. Effect is good, so 7/10. [spoiler=Red-Eyes Orochi Dragon] Name is meh. Picture is bad. Effect is almsot completely worthless. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thanks for the rating.I slightly changed the effect of the last card to make it more easy summon via dragon deck. Any suggestions to make it better effect wise? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Since you improved the last card, this is much better. Orochi isn't so hard to summon, and he's still powerful without being overpowered. People don't seem to like that he can't attack directly, but without the 3 turn limit, that doesn't matter so much anymore. I'm concerned about the LP damage he does. Since it happens when he's SENT to the Graveyard, you could destroy him yourself or Tribute him and it would still work. Since it's nearly half your opponents LP gone, it might be a little too easy to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 So maybe I should make the summoning conditions harder? Like maybe 2 in the Graveyard, 1 on the field. Or maybe 2 on the field and 1 in the graveyard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 still better than the other Red Eyes concepts, so this gets 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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