YU-GI-OH 3600 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 THIS DECK IS BASED ON WATER CREATURES, HENCE THE NAME.IT ISN'T FINISHED YET SO PLEASE RATE ON WHAT YOU SEE. I ALSO HAVE A FIRE CREATURES DECK IN REALISTIC CARDS SOMEWHERE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heronick Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I would rather increase the attack of White Sea Tiger and decrease the amount of cards to draw to 1. Coral monster: How can your opponent know how many water monsters you have in your hand. Easy to cheat so not fair is it?Overal 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 for Krakonian, 2500 burn is just too much Rough Ocean and White Sea Tiger have too bland effects 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I think the pics are nicegood work, for a new menber 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Nice work for a new mem. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 PLEASE DON'T TALK CONSTANTLY IN CAPS BECAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE SHOUTING AT PEOPLE. [align=center]Now that we've got that clear:For a newbie, you have a very good choice of pictures (not pixelated, anime-like, fitting). Krakonian is majorly overpowered. Change 2500 to 800 or maybe 1000. The OCG definitly needs work. You could also the make effects a bit more complicated. With OCG (Official Card Grammar) - 8.5/10Without OCG - 6/10 OCG Corrections The Rough OceanNoneWater Creature: Coral Monsterface-upLife PointsStandby PhasesWater Creature: KrakonianGraveyardLife PointsWater Creature: Monstrous Sea-SerpentNormal Summonedflipped face-upWATERDeckStandby PhasesSpecial Summoned1Water Creature: Sail MonsterDeckWater Creature: White Sea Tiger2 There are a few more wording errors, but I fear that the corrections would be wrong. Hopefully someone else can point them out.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yodog91 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 great pics, i want the krakonan in my deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pojo114 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Id give a 6/10 the coral monster looks bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Kraonan should inflict less damage. It's overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 You put Cthulhu to shame. Ocg errors have been pointed out. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YU-GI-OH 3600 Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 for Krakonian' date=' 2500 burn is just too much Rough Ocean and White Sea Tiger have too bland effects 7.3/10[/quote']Sorry, I forgot to say you must show them in order to increase your life points.Thanx everyone, I am making a deck for every attribute as well, i have alredy made a fire creatures set, nearly finished this one, and in the process of making an earth one right now. Here is a couple of new water creatures. This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by removing 3 water monsters from your graveyard from play. When this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponents life points, send the top 5 cards on your opponents deck to the graveyard. If there are any monster cards in the destroyed cards inflict 200 points of direct damage to your opponents life points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 your Green Lantern Fish's effect is too simple for such a high cost, give it another effect and make its atk higher 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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