Aglaeca, the Moon Blade Angel

[zuken999]

This is the first card of the 2nd set I'm making. Please tell me what my OCG errors are or what can I do to make it better or more balanced. Thanks ^^.

 

 

Aglaeca, the Moon Blade Angel

Dark / Level 7 / Fairy

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 DARK and 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard. The Attribute of this card is also treated as LIGHT. While this card is face-up on the field, any card sent to the Graveyard is removed from play instead. This card gains 100 ATK each time a card is removed from play.

ATK/ 2100 DEF/ 1900

[dragoncreator12]

That's an awesome pic! The effect I think could be better. 8/10

[Serene Eternity]

An astounding picture and your card has perfect OCG although I will update it since you are using old OCG I believe.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 DARK and 2 LIGHT monsters you control. The Attribute of this card is also treated as LIGHT. Once per turn, you can look at the top card of your Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, each time a card is removed from play, this card gains 100 ATK."

 

The effect is Amazing, It would be the pride and joy in a DD Deck! Please might I be sent the image? Also I think it is safe to raise the attack to atleast 2100 since it is a level 7 and the Attack increase is small.

[samss]

Its great amazing pic I love the effect 10/10.

[zuken999]

Btw, the pic was not made by me, credits to ~gotgituey of deviantART.

 

and thanks for the comments. :)

[ragnarok1945]

a little ineffective atk boosting effect, it should gain at least 200 atk per card removed from play

 

8.9/10

[Eury]

Haha I used this pic when I was new here. Good defense against D.D.s. 9/10

[darklord33]

waaaaaay to underpowered since you have to remove from play 4 monsters YOU CONTROL. (that's more than an egyptian god) anyway the effect is pretty useless. beceause it's gonna take you a while to boost up it's atk and you need other cards that remove cards from play. --> (6/10 (nice pic)

 

here's a suggestion: this card cannot be normal summoned or set. this card cannot be special summoned except by removing 1 dark and 1 light monster in your graveyard from play. as long as this card remains face-up on your field all cards that are sent to the graveyard are removed from play instead. this card gains 100 atk each time a card is removed from play.

 

i didn't care about ocg i just wanted to make a suggestion on how to improve your card. if you like it you can correct the ocgs and use it^^

[Alexis Rhodes]

6/10 good picture but the effect is a bit hard to understand it says 2 dark and light on teh field thats 4 monsters for a 2100 attack monster :)

[Big Lez]

Usually a rating of 8/10 (good Pic, average Effect, flawless OCG)

 

But since you are a 1 star member

im really impressed, that you are that skillfull, right now!

9.5/10!!!

[zuken999]

Sorry, I thought control meant both on your field and Graveyard. >.<

And I raised the ATK to 2100 so its ATK isn't that low.

 

Thanks for the replies.

 

EDIT:

 

@darklord33: The effect wasn't supposed to be that way, I worded it wrong, but I like the summoning conditions of your effect better. And I'm going to change the "View top card" effect to the one you mentioned, thanks.

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Bumpz.

[zuken999]

Bump.

[Neo-MasterX]

a bit UPed

8/10