AgentX Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Some of my first cards. Tri-Headed Spirit Dragon King My first synchro monster. I think It might be pretty overpowered. Tell me what you think!{'1 Tuner monster' + 'Spirit Dragon' + 'Spirit Dragon' + 'Spirit Dragon'This card may attack 3 times during the battle phase. Whenever a Dragon type monster is summoned that is Lv. 5 or more, add one Dragon counter to this card. When this card has 2 Dragon counters, you may destroy up to 5 magic/trap cards on the field.} Spirit Dragon One of the cards needed for the Synchro Summon.{This card is treated as a 'Dragon' type monster. Increase this card's ATk and DEF by 200 for every monster on your opponents side of the field.} Tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 There are several things wrong. First of all, more dragons? Geez. Then, your pics are black and white and that doesn't look very good. Both these cards are Spirit type. Although, Spirit types are uncommon here on YCM, so good job. However, the defining theme of Spirit types is that they return to your hand during the End Phase. Your effect has to list that. This makes Spirit Dragon extremely hard to Tune, seeing as it only stays on the field for a turn. This makes your Tri-Headed Dragon almost impossible to summon, requiring three Spirit Dragons. Also, a Synchro Monster has to have 1 specific Tuner and one or more non-Tuners, the Tuner and non-Tuner have to equal the level of the synchro. Therefore, Spirit Dragon should be a Tuner, and only 1 of them should be required for the summoning. Your Synchro is extremely overpowered and your Official Card Grammar is off. A good first effort for a newb, especially since you forayed into Synchro territory in your first post. You'll only get better. :) (I hope my critique doesn't make your brain implode XD) 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 The Picture need color and background 0.0 and yes, the effect is overpowered.For the first card, you might want to change it to Fusion monster ^.^ Good Luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Both these cards are Spirit type. Although' date=' Spirit types are uncommon here on YCM, so good job. However, the defining theme of Spirit types is that they return to your hand during the End Phase. Your effect has to list that.[b']Yes they are but that is a fake type, Dragon is a real type, this card says [spirit / Effect] there is no such thing, that is why this card has a fake type[/b] This makes Spirit Dragon extremely hard to Tune, seeing as it only stays on the field for a turn. This makes your Tri-Headed Dragon almost impossible to summon, requiring three Spirit Dragons. Also, a Synchro Monster has to have 1 specific Tuner and one or more non-Tuners, the Tuner and non-Tuner have to equal the level of the synchro. Therefore, Spirit Dragon should be a Tuner, and only 1 of them should be required for the summoning. This is also not true, just becuase Junk Warrior has Junk Synchron as a Tuner doesnt mean all Tuners need specifics, check Light End Dragon, Dark End Dragon, Collosal Fighter Your Synchro is extremely overpowered and your Official Card Grammar is off. A good first effort for a newb, especially since you forayed into Synchro territory in your first post. You'll only get better. :) (I hope my critique doesn't make your brain implode XD) This card is both Overpowered and Underpowered seeing as this card has a God effect, but will never be able to summon, except with maybe Star Burst or Level Returner XD 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 OP'd and don't make fake types. Pics need to be changed ASAP. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Geez, Namo. Way to dissect my critique. Lawl. XD I know about the Synchros, but thanks to Namo for covering the bit that I left out. Some Synchros just require a Tuner, like Namo clarified above. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Geez' date=' Namo. Way to dissect my critique. Lawl. XD I know about the Synchros, but thanks to Namo for covering the bit that I left out. Some Synchros just require a Tuner, like Namo clarified above. :)[/quote'] lol sorry XD I like to rant, These cards do need LOTSA tweaking though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Don't make fake types Op and OCG 4.5/10 for new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 your spirit types don't even follow the rules the standard spirit type are supposed to do 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hellstuner Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 The card is too OP'ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Ok here to fix it up [Dragon/Spirit] not [spirit/Effect] The first one is Over power and the Summoning requirement need some work you can said Spirit Dragon+ one or more non-Tunner monster The second one make it Tunner and I think the rest of the prob is already state above Good try of the first to learn more about Spirit check this http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Otohime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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