destron Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Hello again. This is the beginnings of my second set "Call of the Beast". I know I finished the first 1 like a week ago, but I had lots more ideas, so here are some finished cards. I may or may not change the name of the pack. If I do I will post it here. Feedback is appreciated! :D My first set called "Infinite Fear" can be seen here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-151719.html [spoiler= Bardarex Force Cards]"Bardarex Force- Karasu"s effect- When this card is special summoned, both players roll a die. Each player does one of the following actions based on their result.1- Discard your hand and draw 1 card2- Discard the top 5 cards on your deck3- Destroy all magic and trap cards on the field4- Destroy all level 4 or higher monsters on the field5- Take 1 card from your deck and add it to your hand. Then discard the top 10 cards on your deck6- Special summon 1 monster with "Bardarex Force" in its name from the graveyard or out of play. [spoiler= Everything else]"Shrine of Air"s effect- This monster cannot be attacked by an EARTH monster or a WATER monster. All winged beast type monsters get +400 ATK during their owner's Battle Phase. If this monster is destroyed as a result of battle or by a trap card, both players must select 1 card on their side of the field. The selected card(s) are destroyed. If there are no cards on either player's side of the field, the player does not have to tribute anything."Soldier of Fear #3"s effect- When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, take 1 "Soldier of Fear #2" from your deck and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed by a trap card, take 1 "Soldier of Fear #1" from your deck and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed by a magic card, take 1 "Soldier of Fear #3" from your deck and add it to your hand."Knight of Fear"s effect- (Soldier of Fear #1 + Soldier of Fear #2 + Soldier of Fear #3)This card cannot be summoned except by fusion summon. Once per turn during your Main Phase 1, select either magic, trap or monster effect. For the remainder of that turn, this card cannot be destroyed by the select card type's effect. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of DARK monsters on your side of the field (excluding this card) x500. This monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF for every monster with "Soldier of Fear" in its name on your side of the field. This card can only attack by paying 500 LP."Mech of Fear"s effect- This monster can only be Special Summoned from your Deck to your side of the field by offering "Knight of Fear" equipped with "Metalmorph" as a Tribute. Once per turn during your Main Phase 1, select either magic, trap or monster effect. For the remainder of that turn, this card cannot be destroyed by the selected card type's effect. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of DARK monsters on your side of the field (excluding this card) x500. This monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF for every monster with "Soldier of Fear" in its name on your side of the field. This card can only attack if you pay 1000 LP. I know Mech of Fear is a little op'ed but think of how hard he is to summon. Also, I know I only have 1 magic card and nor traps, but there will be plenty in the full set!bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Nice! Pics are awesome! And OCG is off. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 those are some good pic selections, except the B&W one, overall they feel very yugi like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 b&w? and also, i s being yugi-like good or bad? good right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Fair Trial's pic is unimpressive, the vanilla needs an effect overall the rest looks fine 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 b&W the fair trial card, also it seemed to complicated for its own good, and it only supports a few cards. so this card really wouldn't be used much in a duel. yeah yugi-like means those pics could mesh-in well with actual cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 everyone always says "don't make vanillas", "they're boring", "duh". there are non- effect monsters in every real pack, so i make them too. that's the way its gonna stay! on a side-note, thanks so far!i really tried to find a good non- real pic for fair trial and i couldn't find one, if someone can find 1 for me that'd b awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melnia Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 The pics look great I think the Vanillas is a bit OP for LV7 same goes for KarasuThe rest look fine to me 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Nice cardsthe OCG is off but something othernext times write the effects of all your cards so if you have OCG errors other people can fix it7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Sure Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 not so bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 i originally had Bardarex Force- Raion as a 8 star, but with a measly 800 def, i decided to make him a seven star. but wats the difference? when does it say u can or can't do something with a seven star and not with an eight? drug-luk . . . what does that mean? i was looking for more than just "not so bad." like why they are not so bad. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 OCG is a little off but 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 I decided to change the name to "Call of the Dragon" because I just found a whole bunch of good dragon pics. Also, I know "Fair Trial"s pic is bad. If you can find a better one OR a pic for a Bardarex Force card, I will give you a rep depending on if I will use the pic or not. Bardarex Force pics can be any kind of humanoid animal with weapons/armor. So please look for "Call of the Dragon" in finished sets and not "Call of the Beast". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 bump. READ POST ABOVE THIS ONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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