A Monster Card - Look At It o.O

[pooppoop1]

 

 

Effect : During your Draw Phase if you draw a Level 4 or lower FIRE monster you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon it. This card cannot attack directly. During your Battle Phase increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each FIRE monster you control. When this card destroys a monster do not apply Battle Damage instead, your opponent takes 1000 points of damage. During your End Phase if there is no FIRE monster on your other then this card, destroy this card.

 

Pic : http://www.costumzee.com/view/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/300px-thefallen.jpg

 

 

Effect : This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned if you have "Pyrotech - The Firebot" on your field. During your Draw Phase if your draw a FIRE monster you can pay 500 Life Points to draw again. This card can only attack directly (If there your opponent controls no monsters). During your opponents Battle Phase, this card gains 200 DEF for each FIRE monster you control. When this card attacks directly pay 1000 Life Points to select 1 FIRE monster in your hand, this card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the selected monster, until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. During your End Phase if there are FIRE monsters other then this card on your field, this card gains ATK for each FIRE monster you control x500 until the next End Phase. You lose 1000 Life Points each time this effect is activated.

 

 

Pic : http://media.photobucket.com/image/Flame%20Concept%20Art/jonoy/CA_ShadowFlame_wip3.jpg

[Blamonchesix]

Ooh. Transformers. :D

 

A little OP though.

8/10 (^_^) Great Fire Card.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG Fix: "During your Draw Phase if you draw a Level 4 or lower FIRE monster you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon it. During your Battle Phase increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each FIRE monster you control. When this card destroys a monster do not apply Battle Damage instead, your opponent takes 1500 points of damage. During your End Phase if there is no FIRE monster on your other then this card, destroy this card."

 

The picture is good but the effect has lots of OCG errors and Its OP since there are no drawbacks =/. its WAAAAY to much burn in a normal burn deck which makes it way more OP. Lower the damage dealt to 1000.....

 

6/10

[pooppoop1]

CHanged damage to 1000 and added a drawback is it better now ?

[Blamonchesix]

I think its better. 8.5/10 now. (^_^)

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Much :3 9/10

[pooppoop1]

Hurray thanks. :D Added another card it's very much like the first but little different and maybe alot more deadly.

[Melnia]

I think its effect Balance out now Good Effect and nice pics good for burn deck that deal most damage without battle

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OCG Fix:

"During your Draw Phase if your draw a FIRE monster you can pay 500 Life Points to draw again. This card can only attack directly (If there your opponent controls no monsters). During your opponents Battle Phase, this card gains 200 DEF for each FIRE monster you control. When this card attacks directly select 1 FIRE monster in your hand, this card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the selected monster, until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. During your End Phase if there are FIRE monsters other then this card on your field, this card gains 500 ATK of each FIRE monster you control until the next End Phase. You lose 1000 Life Points each time this effect is activated."

 

This card is terrifyingly OP :[ like so OP that....like....idk its major league OP

 

I added the (~~~~~~~) because otherwise that can mean that you can attack directly at anytime and thats major OP and i made having this card gain half a monsters attack last until the end of the turn because again thats way to OP.

 

4/10 due to extreme OP :[

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Whoops i messed up in my fix editing

[Neo-MasterX]

for me they are totally balanced

9/10

[dragoncreator12]

OCg looks good since you fix them. Pics are good and they go with the names so 9/10

[pooppoop1]

Since it was so OP'ed i changed it so it wil be more of a pain then a help somewhat...

[blademac]

I think there is too much happening in this card. why are you increasing its ATK and DEF on your opponents turn. (ATK by 500 for each fire monster, DEF 200 for each fire monster in the battle phase). The drawing again if you draw a fire monster is not really related to the rest of the card. apparently you can burn 3000 life points, discard the 3 ultimate obediant fiends, and have this card gain over 4000 atk points, and finally, being forced to pay 1000 lifepoints every turn for the 500 ATK per fire monster boost is just annoying. especially when this card has summoning conditions

 

I would suggest making the drawing effect a continuous magic card, changing the effect to "once per turn you may discard one fire monster from your hand to have this card gain half the ATK of the discarded monster until the end phase of your opponents next turn" drop the 500 ATK gain entirly, and honestly, i could see dropping the DEF gain and the summoning conditions as well.

 

I really think you're trying to do too much with one card.

 

4/10

good pic

good name

effect needs work

[Ghost Ryder]

OP'ed, over-complication. And OP', with OCG errors. Pics are alright, 6/10.

[ragnarok1945]

transformer cards. LLD already pointed out the OCG errors, both cards are on the OPed end though

 

7/10