Brendano Harns Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Help me with the OCG/balance please. If you want to fix the pic, you must find the pic in the showcase section. You can still comment on the pic, though. Enjoy! ^_^ [spoiler=Effect:]This card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster. Once per turn, when you discard 1 monster from your hand, have this card gain ATK equal to the number of Rock-Type monsters in your Graveyard, x 200. During your Standby Phase, decrease this card's ATK equal to the number of cards you control, x 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 It's perfect except the last sentence should be the first. Good pic. 9/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 I agree with the above comment. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 i think the image don't suit the crystal theme^^i have seen better images from you ;) effect and OCG is ok:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Thanks! ...And yeah, I think you're right, the last sentence should be the first. Thanks everyone! ^_^ EDIT: I looked at it again, and I read the second to last sentence, which I thought was the last. They always have the "This card is also..." at the end, so I don't think so. Unless you can show me an example on a new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 good picture but the effect and its grammer is all messed up :) 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fog38 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 Hi Fuzzball. Your art is improving, there's more detail. As for the effect it is balanced and usable, if it were a real card I'm not sure it would be more then a rare though. I like it. :)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 ZOMG, I don't believe it Fog, you're actually online. Thanks! I may edit the effect a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 pic doesn't suite the crystal types, move the last sentence to the first and you're good 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 New effect is up! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I've seen better images from you too7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 If the pic dropped it from a 10/10 to a 7.5, then it must be really bad. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 If the pic dropped it from a 10/10 to a 7.5' date=' then it must be [b']really[/b] bad. XD please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Please what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 ? Sup Fuzzers Well, Effects Nice, Pic Is.....How Do I put This Without Hurting you [spoiler=Pic]GREAT! Yah, Just Some More work on it though, kay. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 the pic is a litte weird but cool, and the effect is intersing9/10very nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks everyone! lol, Rua. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 ok with the corrections now I'll raise the rate up to 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 YAY! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Pic is ok and effect is ok 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Are you sure you couldn't say that in any less words? [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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