☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 My latest card, pleaz comment and rateWhen this card is Normal Summoned, draw cards from your Deck until you have 4 cards in your hand.(If you already have 4 cards, draw 1 card.) During each of your Standby Phases, send one card from your Hand to the Graveyard. If you don't, this card is destroyed. This card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points becomes the half of the original ATK of this card. Kudos to everybody who help me improve this card! You all get 1 rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 1. When do you send the card from your hand to the Graveyard?2. This card is very, very OP'ed3. You get to draw when this card is summoned (including flip and special)4. If you get this card off the field fast (ie: torrental, compulsory, book of moon, etc.) it is broken. 3/5Nice pic, but would be banned immediatly after production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 1. When do you send the card from your hand to the Graveyard?2. This card is very' date=' very OP'ed3. You get to draw when this card is summoned (including flip and special)4. If you get this card off the field fast (ie: torrental, compulsory, book of moon, etc.) it is broken. 3/5Nice pic, but would be banned immediatly after production.[/quote'] I dont think its that OPD since you only end up dealing 1100 points of damage. (I know cards with more.) If I make it so you discard 2 cards, do you think it will be more balanced? Can you explain 4? i dont get what you mean by "broken" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 drawing up to 6 cards is a little TOO much draw power at too little cost, might want to tune that down 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 drawing up to 6 cards is a little TOO much draw power at too little cost' date=' might want to tune that down 8/10[/quote'] So do you think I should lower the draw amount, or change the cost to 2 cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I'd just drop the amount and that should be fine, although either way is acceptable. Tell you wait, just flip a coin: heads --> option1, tails ---> option2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Landed on heads :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 so, what would be my fixed rating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I'll raise the rate to 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 A card like this is good/broken because of its draw power. if i have no cards in my hand, one monster on the field, and compulsory evacuation device on the field. i draw your magician, summon him by sacrifice and draw four cards. two traps, double summon, and moselium of the emperor. I activate double and moselium, then i set the traps, bounce the magician and summon him again, drawing 4 cards. i set all the traps/magic including torrential and call of the haunted. next turn i torrential your monster, call of the haunted the magicain and draw even more cards. next i book of moon it and then flip summon it to draw EVEN MORE CARDS. this card is devesating in an exodia deck or a burn deck (where your hand is usually empty). because you draw every time this card is summoned in any way, and the card has no summoning conditions...hence OP'ed/broken3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 It's still a bit op'ed. But nice idea.;) Here is an OCG check:When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, draw cards from your Deck until you have 4 cards in your hand.(If you already have 4 cards, draw 1 card.) During each of your Standby Phases, send one card from your Hand to the Graveyard. If you don't, this card is destroyed. This card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points becomes the half of the original ATK of this card.(this is true, I guess :) ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 When this card is Summoned, Draw cards from the top of your Deck until you have 4 cards (If you already have 4 cards, draw 1 card.) Every turn during your Standby Phase, send one card from your Hand to your Graveyard. If you cannot, destroy this card. This card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. All direct damage done by this card to your Opponents Life Points is halved. I think the effect is overpowered. But not bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 A card like this is good/broken because of its draw power. if i have no cards in my hand' date=' one monster on the field, and compulsory evacuation device on the field. i draw your magician, summon him by sacrifice and draw four cards. two traps, double summon, and moselium of the emperor. I activate double and moselium, then i set the traps, bounce the magician and summon him again, drawing 4 cards. i set all the traps/magic including torrential and call of the haunted. next turn i torrential your monster, call of the haunted the magicain and draw even more cards. next i book of moon it and then flip summon it to draw EVEN MORE CARDS. this card is devesating in an exodia deck or a burn deck (where your hand is usually empty). because you draw every time this card is summoned in any way, and the card has no summoning conditions...hence OP'ed/broken3/5[/quote'] Ummm ok? You seem very...detailed. which is good, but basically what I'm getting is that I should change it to a specific type of Summon? I can do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR. ANDERSON Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Everythings already said. :( but I like it, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Beautiful, I love it, great job 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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