gallio1 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 OK this is a preview to the the sword set, sword set is the right hand man of the shield setThis card is treated as Machine-Type. This card gains 400 ATK for each face-up Machine-Type on the field. When a Machine-Type monster is on the field is removed from play, this card's controller must pay half their Life Points. This card cannot be selected as an attack target while a there is another face-up monster on the field.This card cannot be destroyed by battle while you control a face-up Machine-Type monster other than "Heavy Shot". Please Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 OCG has some mistakes. Try this ;-):Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each Machine Type monster on the Field. If a Machine Type monster is destroyed, this card is removed from play and you must halve your Life Points. If there is another monster on your side of the Field, your opponent cannot select this monster as an attack target. And I think it's a bit underpowered. Maybe you can change it, for example decrase its ATK and give it an effect like this:Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each Machine Type monster on the Field. If a Machine Type monster is destroyed, this card is removed from play.When this card is removed from play, you can halve your Life Points to Special Summon this monster to your side of the Field during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Two types at the same time is not possible. It must be either a Warrior or a Machine.Or you must mention: "This card is also treated as...." 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Some OCG errors..................... But it's good..........Two types at the same time is not possible. It must be either a Warrior or a Machine.Or you must mention: "This card is also treated as...."This too................ Anyway 8/10............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 OCG fix: "This card is also treated as Machine-Type. This card gains 400 ATK for each face-up Machine-Type on the field. When a Machine-Type monster is on the field is removed from play, this card's controller must pay half their Life Points. This card cannot be selected as an attack target while a there is another face-up monster on the field." Not bad, the image pretty good, but I would lower its Level and ATK accordingly. The Life Points cost is good, but it is situational, being as Machine-Types don't really deal with being removed from play. Which makes the card overpowered, maybe change the last sentence to: This card cannot be destroyed by battle while you control a face-up Machine-Type monster other than "Heavy Shot". 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 This is overpowered it needs something like:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying your half Life Pointsin other words it needs a bigger drawback.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I would never use this sorry. Halve your life points when a machine is destroyed? Also I'd lower the attack to make the attack boost less OP'd. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks for the reviews ill change it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 eh im tired of reviewing so heres just my rating 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 good enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I'm surprised this doesn't have a specific summoning requirement 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 why you want it to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 well otherwise it'd be WAY too powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR. ANDERSON Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 umm its alrite 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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