Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I REVISED THESE. [spoiler=Gift Cards] This was a gift from everlasting :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 well....someone already made a great avatar set......and yours already has a few errors...1. Avatar is a Fake-Type...make it a Warrior-Type.2. Aangs OCG friendly new effect --- "This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WATER, and FIRE." also, make him a four star, and lower the ATK and DEF.3. Avatar state's OCG friendly effect - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 "Aang" you control. This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WATER, FIRE, and WIND." made a better effect, and make it LIGHT, not DIVINE...6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 well....someone already made a great avatar set......and yours already has a few errors...1. Avatar is a Fake-Type...make it a Warrior-Type.2. Aangs OCG friendly new effect --- "This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH' date=' WATER, and FIRE." also, make him a four star, and lower the ATK and DEF.3. Avatar state's OCG friendly effect - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 "Aang" you control. This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WATER, FIRE, and WIND." made a better effect, and make it LIGHT, not DIVINE...6/10.[/quote'] Voilà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 1. Aangs attack and defense are too high to be level 5, so you can raise it by 1 level (Not that it matters to you, since it will still be worth one tribute)2. Most Divine monsters are level 10, and Avatar is level 8. Make it Light or Wind.3. Make the effect like how everlasting said.4. Aang is a wind type, so in its effect, say "This card's attribute is also treated as an EARTH, WATER, and FIRE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cutie Princess~! :3 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 well....someone already made a great avatar set......and yours already has a few errors...1. Avatar is a Fake-Type...make it a Warrior-Type.2. Aangs OCG friendly new effect --- "This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH' date=' WATER, and FIRE." also, make him a four star, and lower the ATK and DEF.3. Avatar state's OCG friendly effect - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 "Aang" you control. This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH, WATER, FIRE, and WIND." made a better effect, and make it LIGHT, not DIVINE...6/10.[/quote'] Same here~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 OK... write his effect exactly how everlasting said you should, and you forgot no fake types. Otherwise, good job.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToxicLatte Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Pretty good. Errors like everyone else said.I'd give it 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Much better. Just Aang, make it kind of like Avatar, and there won't be too many errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Nice. Just 2 OCG errors. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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