Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 All image credit goes to deviantart, please criticize if you would, I want to get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Albus Dumbledore and Lord Voldemort should have the same Attack (just for the sake of nerds like me. And because Voldemort would be the only Dark Lord, make it a death eater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 ...wow. just, wow. ummmm...no clue what to say to this. ...8/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Yeah, I forgot... no fake types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 not to offend you dude but HARRY POTTER SUCKS 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Make them all spellcasters, and the fake types will be gone. And Harry potter does not suck. 8.75/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 we don't mind the fake types, but some people will flame you for it. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Yeah, my bad. I don't believe in it anymore. Anyway, +.5 from my last rating. 9.25/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 changed all the images and altered some effects and of course new cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 added hagrid mcgonagall malfoy and flitwick, more to come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Some of the pics are questionable (hagrid and harry)but still pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Some of the pics are questionable (hagrid and harry)but still pretty good 7/10Â that harry pics great, watr u talkin about?? but yea, u wud NOT believe how hard it is to find a good pic of hagrid by himself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 It kinda looks like harry has a beard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 - It may just be me, but Draco Malfoy and Ron Weasley seem to have an ATK and DEF that are a little high for Level 4 monsters. - Giving a 2500 ATK monster like Hagrid the ability to attack directly seems a little overpowered, especially since no other specific cards are needed to do it. I would recommend either making it so that the direct attack from said effect can only use half his attack(or something like that), or make the condition a little more difficult to pull off, like making it dependent on one of a few specific Spellcaster monsters being destroyed, or taking X amount of damage as a result of a Spellcaster monster being destroyed. - The last part of Expelliarmus is worded kind of oddly. Is it along the lines of "If the equipped monster is destroyed by Battle, destroy all Spell and Trap cards equipped to the monster that destroyed it." ? OCG: - "side of the field" = "field" Of course, the above doesn't really take away from the fact that these are very good cards. The pictures are all very good(the Hagrid one is slightly jarring in how different its style is from all of the others, but that doesn't even really qualify as an issue, and I definitely know how difficult it can be sometimes to find usable pictures). The effects are all true to the characters, and it even seems suitable for Harry and Voldemort to be Vanillas, what with their utter reliance on one relatively basic, signature spell(I think anyway, been awhile since I read any of the books). Very good; I say keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 It kinda looks like harry has a beard no no' date=' that would be his tie[hr']- It may just be me' date=' but Draco Malfoy and Ron Weasley seem to have an ATK and DEF that are a little high for Level 4 monsters. - Giving a 2500 ATK monster like Hagrid the ability to attack directly seems a little overpowered, especially since no other specific cards are needed to do it. I would recommend either making it so that the direct attack from said effect can only use half his attack(or something like that), or make the condition a little more difficult to pull off, like making it dependent on one of a few specific Spellcaster monsters being destroyed, or taking X amount of damage as a result of a Spellcaster monster being destroyed. - The last part of Expelliarmus is worded kind of oddly. Is it along the lines of "If the equipped monster is destroyed by Battle, destroy all Spell and Trap cards equipped to the monster that destroyed it." ? OCG: - "side of the field" = "field" Of course, the above doesn't really take away from the fact that these are very good cards. The pictures are all very good(the Hagrid one is slightly jarring in how different its style is from all of the others, but that doesn't even really qualify as an issue, and I definitely know how difficult it can be sometimes to find usable pictures). The effects are all true to the characters, and it even seems suitable for Harry and Voldemort to be Vanillas, what with their utter reliance on one relatively basic, signature spell(I think anyway, been awhile since I read any of the books). Very good; I say keep it up![/quote'] malfoy and ron-good point, they shud be level 5expelliarmus-im trying to say any equip cards on that monster are destroyed, you know, the "disarming" spell-i'll reword thathagrid-REALLY hard to find a good pic, believe me, and il halve his direct attack damage i supposeOCG-maybe change it, gotta check wit someone firstand thank you, u give good advice/criticism for someone whos somewhat new here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Actually, I've been on this forum for about a year and have been making Yu-Gi-Oh cards for at least a few years before that; I just tend to be kinda off-and-on about it, and I don't actually post here all that much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Actually' date=' I've been on this forum for about a year and have been making Yu-Gi-Oh cards for at least a few years before that; I just tend to be kinda off-and-on about it, and I don't actually post here all that much.[/quote']Â AH. never mind then. but u do take the time to give full-out advice and that's something to be admired Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 added 2 new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verebazs2 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Super! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Why the hell is Harry a F---ing Vanilla? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Why the hell is Harry a F---ing Vanilla? Was there a law that Main Characters can't be Normal Monsters? He can do what he wants with his cards. He chose to do that. Anyway, I can't find too many OCG errors. The only ones I can find are when you said "may" in Avada Kedavra and Priori Incantatem. You should know how to fix it by now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Why the hell is Harry a F---ing Vanilla? eh. cudnt think of an effect :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cocomo1999 Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Good cards, they are pretty good pics, if you are going for the book descriptions, but I think you should add some cards like Sirius Black and Bellatrix Lestrange, but still pretty good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bignoobever Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 I like the pictures. But shouldn't Dumbledore have most attack points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinity999 Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 not bad not bad at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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