WH40K Decks(redone) Comments&Criticism welcome

[The Emperor of Mankind]

Now listen all you "Critiques" if you come to help improve then feel free to say what's wrong, why you did not like it and HOW to improve, but if your as blind as me(like in the other thread) then do not post, because your being as stupid as those on Youtube(Why start conversations on Politics in a Game video?)

 

So here it goes:

 

 

Chaos Deck:

So, Comment/Criticize, but don't be a half-critique, give your full opinion and HOW you think it would be done better, for if you are a critique, surly you would have done something better yourself right? or else how can you even be called one such as that?

 

Also, I'm blunt, so, saying anything where you expect me to get hints, don't do that... it'll leave me feeling frustrated(and surprised at your stupidity)

 

So, tell if you think you can do better(even show!)

 

 

Also, remember, not everyone makes art "worthy" of Yu-Gi-Oh! as most art is done by professionals(or very lucky amateurs)

[Stealthumbreon]

I do like the cards. Unfortunately, an extremely low defense does not compensate for the fact that a Level 5 monster has enough ATK points to tie with a Blue-Eyes White Dragon.

 

There are also OCG (Official Card Grammar, not regular grammar) errors, for example, you said that Tzeentch, Lord of Change, is a master of deception and time, in the description. It is OK for a vanilla to have that in its description, but Effect Monsters are not allowed to do that. The worst case of OCG errors on your cards is obviously Slaanesh, because you said "wish" instead of "can" and you mentioned the monster's name instead of "this card" or "this monster".

 

All in all, the cards have potential and they are already good in this format, but I am forced to give you a mediocre rating of 6/10 due to your mass errors on official card grammar.

[Cutie Princess~! :3]

No Vanilla's, Overpowered, OCG Errors

 

 

2/10

[The Emperor of Mankind]

So, as I asked above, HOW would you do that? I wish people would read...

 

and i actually like this Criticism from you(your being a little more helpful) instead of doing:

 

"NO! NO! NO! NOOO! 0/10!!!" like sarly did, instead of offering a suggestion, now that is what I want from you, a suggestion.

 

Slaanesh is a God of deception, I want a way to no matter what(even if a card that's supposed to force face down cards to reveal themselves) that Slaanesh can effectively cancel out that card(without destroying it)

 

 

 

I'll lower the Khorne Berzerker to 2500 so if Khorne is played he can match up to a Blue eyes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No Vanilla's' date=' Overpowered, OCG Errors

 

 

2/10

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Your either:

 

A: Your deliberately trying to anger me

or

B: you intentionally did not read what I wrote up at the top.

[Stealthumbreon]

Make it a 6-star and it won't be flamed. Because 5 star monsters usually only have 2000-2200 ATK.

[The Emperor of Mankind]

Make it a 6-star and it won't be flamed. Because 5 star monsters usually only have 2000-2200 ATK.

 

Alright' date=' will do and done, anything else?

 

 

a New card recently created: [img']http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1246/388426p.jpg[/img]

[Stealthumbreon]

Get rid of OCG errors. A good list of OCG errors/fixes can be found at:

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html.

[The Emperor of Mankind]

Imperial Deck(10 cards for review):

 

 

Now, please don't complain of Artwork(hard to find art for the Primarchs as it is) but I would like comments/suggestions/Criticism on the cards themselves.