avalon2423 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I am new to this and these are the first cards I have made. I am making them for my 2 nephews for their birthdays. I would appreciate any help in the OCG department, and any other feedback. I am sure some of them are OP but they only duel eachother so its not a huge deal to me. Also I am not set in stone on a couple of the names or pictures lol... One has a Zombie Deck and the trap card to this set, I havent come up with a picture yet but here is its effect. "Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the effect of an opponents Spell Card. You may use its effect as your own." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arias Knight Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Your cards are pretty good, but Dred Pirate Scully is a little overpowered for something that doesn't require Tributes. It should have a high cost or make it more difficult to Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 all the effects right now are good, but too bland, they need more effects 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 This is the others Machine Deck. and here are some Spellcaster ones I made for them. I know they arent great but please be kind :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 the only one I didn't like is Android, which seems too boring compared to the others 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 what do you mean they need more effects? like which and what? as for Dred Pirate Scully would it make it better if it was a 5 star but with the same attack and defense. that way it needs 1 tribute?I wasnt crazy about Android either. Wasnt sure what to do with him without making him OP....Is the OCG ok on these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 the only one I didn't like is Android' date=' which seems too boring compared to the others 9.2/10[/quote']yeah android is weird bu the rest ar awsome. 9.9/10 the last 1 was taking of cause of the first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaiku Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 That's a nice thing you're doing for your nephews, but I assume you're just going to show them these, right? You can't officialy play with these, unless you print them or something. Yeah, most of them are OPed, and you can just edit new cards into the first post. The pics are pretty kewl, and the effects are alright, except for the fact that they're OPed. 8/10.Great for your first shot at cardmaking! Your nephews should be proud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Yea Im going to have these printed out for them for their borthdays. My brother runs a printing press company so he is going to help me do them. They dont play in tournaments they just duel eachother and friends. Thought it would be cool for them to have 1 of a kind cards.....I tried to balance them tho, which are OPed? I tried to make sure that if they had a good effect that it was balanced with a cost somewhere else wether in life points or low attack or something.... and How can I make Android better? what can i do to boost the effect and make it interesting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Some OCG errors. Pics are good. Nice ^_^. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 What are the OCG errors? I would really like to fix them and make these great. Thanks again everyone for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 any help on any OCG errors would be welcomed :)... also on the one trap card, i dont have pictured tho, i could use some help for sure on that one, (Trap)"Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the effect of an opponents Spell Card. You may use its effect as your own." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 very good cards but could you please write the next times the OCG under10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon2423 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Ok so here is that Trap Card I was working on. If there are any OCG errors please point them out :) "Discard 2 cards from your hand and remove them from play to negate the effect of an opponents Spell Card. You may use that Spell Card effect as your own." and here is Android again. I tried fixing it. Hope it is better now..The OCG is a bit off, any help would be appreciated. "When this monster is destroyed, draw 3 cards. Select 1 for your Hand. Place 1 in the Graveyard and 1 in your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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