Datenshi Uchiha Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Dark World" monsterWhen this monster is Special Summoned, discard all the cards in both players hands.Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the effect of a Normal Spell or Trap card being played to "Your opponent discards 1 random card from their hand". so let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 When the text on the card becomes too little, make sure you write the effect too on your post.Criimson is at the brink of being OP (but I guess all synchros are like that.) :DDark World Palace seems unnecessary for a Dark World Deck. Still, not bad. 8/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 reduce the attack of crimson, and then it will be ok. btw original effect. DWP's second effect is useless, dark world creatures special summon by they're own effect anyway. wait a minute, you just wrote diety instead of deity??????????? that really pisses me off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Datenshi Uchiha Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 When the text on the card becomes too little' date=' make sure you write the effect too on your post.Criimson is at the brink of being OP (but I guess all synchros are like that.) :DDark World Palace seems unnecessary for a Dark World Deck. Still, not bad. 8/10. (^_^)[/quote'] thanx for the info. I wented ahead and added the effect for Criimson. Also the only real good thing about Dark World Palace is that it makes the vanillia dw monsters playable otherwise it would be better to just play Mystic Plasma Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Datenshi Uchiha Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Ok i corrected the spelling error and lowered the attack a bit to try and balance it out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Criimson is Dark Deal as a monster card covering not just Normal Spells but Traps too for a lower LP cost. Also, since many Tuner monsters are lower than Level 4, it might be advisable to change your monster's summoning requirments to: 1 Tuner + 1 OR MORE non-Tuner monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Crimson's effect is too powerful for merely 500 LP, make the cost bigger 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Datenshi Uchiha Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Ok i made some of the suggested changes. I uped the cost of the effect. and made it "1 tuner +1 or more non-Tuner "Dark World" monster" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Both pics are very nice ;), some OCG errrors. 7,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 cool pics man ^^ try to fix the OCG , pm to a high lvl ^^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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