Spell CARD

[Jonny]

Hope you like it ^^

 

 

the effects are a little bit short , but w.E

[Jonny]

bump?

[Neo-MasterX]

Parasite Worm OCG fix:

Select a monster on your opponent's side of the field, equip it to this card. At any of your Draw Phase decrease the equipped monsters ATK by 200.

Spiritual Sword OCG fix:

Select a monster on your side of the field, equip it to this card. Decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 1000 ATK, after decreasing the ATK the equipped monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

Nice cards and nice ideas

8/10

[Moonlight Princess]

Nice Cards:).Here is some OCG check:

PARASITE WORM: Select a monster on the Field and equip it with this card. Decrease the equipped monster's ATK by 200 every Draw/Stanby/Main/Battle/End Phase.(You have to choose a phase)

[Jonny]

thx both ^^ i gonna fix right now :D

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bumpy :P

[karasu45]

Great cards man :D 9/10

[Fishykid]

ITZ TOTALAY KEWLIO N SO'Z DA SECUND UN!

 

They're cool.

8/10.

[Jonny]

ty fishyboy ^^

[KdogPrime]

NO, do not change the effect of Parasite Worm! Letting you pick which phase you get to decrease the equipped monster's ATK? Equip spells do not work that way. Once they are equipped, that's it. Effect applied. You don't just get to suddenly chose when it works. An effect like this would apply during either player's Standby Phase, or Main Phase, or Battle Phase, or End Phase, NOT Draw Phase. The only effects that apply during the Draw Phase are usually effects that affect how you draw cards, or activate in response to you drawing a card.

 

The effect you had for Parasite Worm was fine the way it was beforehand.

 

Spiritual Sword OCG fix:

Select a monster you control, equip it WITH this card. Decrease the ATK of the EQUIPPED monster by 1000 ATK. The equipped monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

[Jonny]

thx for fix , but rate? lol

[KdogPrime]

The effect of Parasite Worm is very similar to Germ Infection and the effect of Spiritual Sword is exactly the same as Shooting Star Bow - Ceal.

 

The pictures are good, but try coming up with some different effects, because these effects are not very original, especially the second card, which is a direct copy of a TCG/OCG card. Since the worm is parasitic, think of an effect that hurts your opponent while benefiting you. As for the Spiritual Sword, try to think of what spirits represent. They can be evil, or good, but they usually invoke thoughts of the souls of dead people. Monsters go to the Graveyard when they "die", so maybe an effect that does something with monsters in the Graveyard?

 

For now, I'll have to rate these cards 3/10, for lack of originality.

[Jonny]

huh , i never heard of Star Bow :S and i gonna change those effects later but trust me i never heard of Star Bow

[KdogPrime]

It's an old school card, don't worry about it. Came out in TCG with Dark Crisis. It think that was 6 or 7 years ago.

[Jonny]

lol ;)

[Shocked]

The parasite worm's pic is original from yugioh right? OCG fix are explain by users above ^.^

Nice effect. 6.5/10

[Jonny]

nop parasit worm is not from a real card ^^

[BoltDragon]

OCG fixing: Parasite Worm "...by 200 each of both players Standby Phase" PS: It looks more like a monster card.

 

Very good pics ;) 8/10

[ragnarok1945]

nice idea, maybe add another effect and you should be fine

 

8/10

[Kotaro]

A few OCG errors but have already been stated.

 

Both cards are balanced. Maybe adding another effect onto each might make the cards look much better and the images are quite good.

 

8/10

[Jonny]

ty gimme some idea lol ^^

[kriskirla]

What do you mean "round" ??

[The Great Wolf Sif]

Alright....Honestly there simple but they work.

8/10

[Jonny]

thanks ^^