CallMDel Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Some dragons. Can't be put in the same deck for the one's can be summoned by discarding all cards in the hand to the graveyard. Rate Comment Suscribe please.PS: i know they're Over Power, But of course itll be cool if its real. ALSO, PLEASE FIX MY OCG ERRORS.It'll be really Thanked. (Fixed Once) Thanks to KDogPrime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 im tired o dragons.... -.- anyways nice cards 7.5/10ow wait , those cards a OPED too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 too OP'dand two thingsmore than 90% of YCM members hates normal cardsall may correct your ocg if you post it with the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Interesting effects, but I'm curious about something. Why do you call them "Elemental Dragons" when they are named after gemstones? All right, let's clear up some effects and fix these monsters. 1. Topaz Dragon. Increase its Level by 1. Text Correction: A dragon pierced by a giant topaz meteorite. 2. Jasper Dragon. The gem Jasper is not purple. Blue is rare, but it's usually red or orange. I would change the name to Amethyst Dragon. OCG correction: This monster can attack only once every 2 turns. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by battle while in Defense Position. Damage Calculation is applied normally. Bump its level up to 10 or 11. Despite it's drawbacks, it's still a monster with 5000 ATK. It needs some kind of summmoning requirement, not just simple tributes. You could keep it a Level 8, but you'd have to decrease its ATK by about 1000 points to keep it fair. 3. Emerald Dragon. OCG Correction: Change "end of phase" to "End Phase of the turn this card is Summoned". 4. Ruby Dragon. This monster's effect is confusing. Does it go back to your hand, or into the graveyard at the end of your turn? It seems like a hard to use effect, because to summon it, you have to discard it to the graveyard first, then summon it. Then it goes back to your hand, or can you send it to the Graveyard instead? You might want to consider NOT making this monster a Spirit-type. The summoning requirement sounds costly, but it's not all that much to pay for such a heavy hitting monster. Since there are so many cards that allow you to easily ditch DARK monsters to the graveyard, it wouldn't be hard at all to crack out this monster. Make it harder to summon. 5. Sapphire Dragon. OCG looks good. You might want to consider how easily this card could be used. You can summon it turn after turn, and end the Duel in just 4 turns with those direct attacks. Consider maybe adding an additional restriction, like the Emerald Dragon, making you skip your next Draw Phase if you summon it. Lastly, remember that words like Deck, Draw Phase (Main Phase, Battle Phase, End Phase), Graveyard, Special or Normal Summon (or just Summon), Attack and Defense Position are all capitalized in the card's effect. Keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 your 3 spirit monsters you forgot to say they can't be special summoned give the vanilla an effect, and your effect cards are Oped anyway 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Topaz Dragon didn't need an ATK/DEF boost. He should have been a Level 7. It's pretty clear that these monsters are not Spirit type monsters anymore. I would make them just Effect monsters. Amethyst Dragon still needs a summoning requirement. You can't have a monster with ATK that high summoned by just two tributes. It is spelled SAPPHIRE. Also, the OCG should read. This card can be Special Summoned only by discarding all other cards in your hand except this card. Skip your next Draw Phase if you Summon this card. Etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Please read the OCG thread. Most YCM members dislike bad OCG. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118387.html 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Several of those card are OP's. The pic is okay, effect seem not bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 You made a vanilla! Bravery is your companion ;).Pics are very nice :DEffects are OP'd. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Nice pics but they are a bit oped . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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