No Peace to The Doomed

[archie17]

 

"Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. When this card is activated, as long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards get destroyed or discarded, they are sent to their Removed From Play Zone instead of their Graveyard. If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field."

 

This card is an off-shoot of "Tribute to The Doomed" card and a reverse strategy of Bakura's near the end of the anime series.

 

HOW THIS CARD WORKS:

 

SCENARIO

 

1st Turn

Opponent's turn - Your opponent draws 6 cards. Your opponent places 1 monster on the field and ends his turn.

 

Your turn - You draw 6 cards:

 

1 is "Tribute to The Doomed"

1 is "No Peace for The Doomed"

1 monster card

3 other blah cards

 

1) You activate "No Peace for The Doomed", and discard 2 blah cards. You now have 3 cards left.

 

[YOUR OPPONENT'S GRAVEYARD IS NOW GONE.]

 

2) Next you activate "Tribute to The Doomed", and discard 1 blah card to destroy your opponent's monster. Your opponent is now open to attack. You now have 1 card left.

 

[YOUR OPPONENT'S MONSTER IS NOW PERMANENTLY GONE.]

 

3) You use your last card which is a monster card and summon it to the field to attack your opponent's life points directly.

 

[GREAT FIRST MOVE! NOW YOUR OPPONENT WILL BE ON HIS TIPPY TOES FOR THE REST OF THE DUEL.]

 

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Even if this card doesn't last long on your field. The damage it can cause is unrecoverable to your opponent, helping to make the duel in your favor.

 

This card can totally ruin a person's complete strategy if they lose key cards.

 

This card would be a nightmare for "The Wing Dragon of Ra" god card.

 

I know some will say this is OPed, but I disagree, there is no offensive or even defensive increase in power to the controller of this card, it simply makes it more difficult for the opponent to duel. I think discarding 2 cards to cause confusion to you opponent's strategy is fair.

 

Even though this card is played, a resilient duelist can still win just as if this card was never activated. It simply depends on the situation.

 

 

 

EDIT: I'm gonna change the name of this card to: "No Peace to The Doomed" instead.

[awesomeuser]

OCG fix:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. [*WTF!? here*] If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

You may have meant "If this is destroyed, add you opponent's removed from play cards to their Graveyard."

 

Great idea.

 

Make the fixes and this is a 10.

 

9/10

[archie17]

OCG fix:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field' date=' your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. [*WTF!? here*'] If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

You may have meant "If this is destroyed, add you opponent's removed from play cards to their Graveyard."

 

Great idea.

 

Make the fixes and this is a 10.

 

9/10

 

When cards are sent to the "Removed From Play Zone" even if this card gets destroyed, those cards that got discarded will remain in that Zone and will not return to the Graveyard. Your opponent will simply get his Graveyard back and from that point all cards will go there for now on. Which means at least those cards will still be recoverable.

 

Edit I just reviewed your OCG. I do like it better. I will probably change it later thanks.

[awesomeuser]

OCG fix:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field' date=' your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. [*WTF!? here*'] If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

You may have meant "If this is destroyed, add you opponent's removed from play cards to their Graveyard."

 

Great idea.

 

Make the fixes and this is a 10.

 

9/10

 

No, When cards are sent to the "Removed From Play Zone" even if this card gets destroyed, those cards that got discarded will remain in that Zone and will not return to the Graveyard. Your opponent will simply get his Graveyard back and from that point all cards will go there for now on. Which means at least those cards will still be recoverable.

 

The the OCG fix is thus:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead.

 

Read the text to Marco Cosmos and you'll understand the OCG fix. Removed cards are recoverable. See D.D.R.

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Macro_Cosmos

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D.D.R.

[archie17]

How about this

 

REVISED OCG:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard is back in play.

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OCG fix:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field' date=' your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. [*WTF!? here*'] If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

You may have meant "If this is destroyed, add you opponent's removed from play cards to their Graveyard."

 

Great idea.

 

Make the fixes and this is a 10.

 

9/10

 

No, When cards are sent to the "Removed From Play Zone" even if this card gets destroyed, those cards that got discarded will remain in that Zone and will not return to the Graveyard. Your opponent will simply get his Graveyard back and from that point all cards will go there for now on. Which means at least those cards will still be recoverable.

 

The the OCG fix is thus:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead.

 

Read the text to Marco Cosmos and you'll understand the OCG fix. Removed cards are recoverable. See D.D.R.

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Macro_Cosmos

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D.D.R.

 

Yes I know Removed cards are recoverable, but they are harder to recover because there are fewer cards to use to recover them with than for the Graveyard.

 

Most duelist don't keep those type of cards because they concrete of recovering from the Graveyard instead.

[awesomeuser]

How about this

 

REVISED OCG:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field' date=' your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard is back in play.

[/quote']

 

The last bit is pointless. Marco has the same effect (minus a bit) and there is no part say that. BTW, there is no Removed from Play Zone. It is simply removed. the Grave is always in play.

 

See this (last paragraph): http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_Play_Zone

[archie17]

How about this

 

REVISED OCG:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field' date=' your opponent's Graveyard is removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead. If this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard is back in play.

[/quote']

 

The last bit is pointless. Marco has the same effect (minus a bit) and there is no part say that. BTW, there is no Removed from Play Zone. It is simply removed. the Grave is always in play.

 

See this (last paragraph): http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_Play_Zone

 

Ah so I stand corrected. Well how do I state in OCG format when this card is destroyed the Graveyard returns to your opponent. Any suggestions on how to word that part?

[awesomeuser]

Hmm... I made an error here.

 

OCG fix:

 

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is considered [*<-- not sure of the term*] removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard remove them from play instead.

 

Or something like that.

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, remove all cards in your opponent's graveyard from play. When this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

And I don't get the last part.

[archie17]

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' remove all cards in your opponent's graveyard from play. When this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field.

 

And I don't get the last part.

[/quote']

 

I guess this part: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field"

 

makes this part unnecessary: "When this card is destroyed, your opponent's Graveyard returns to their side of the field."

 

Its like making a double statement.

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FINAL OCG:

"Discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to activate this card. As long as it remains face-up on the field, your opponent's Graveyard is considered removed from play. When your opponent's cards are sent to the Graveyard, remove them from play instead."

[ragnarok1945]

nice, a graveyard removal card, reminds me of The Cursed Twin Dolls spell card in the anime

 

9/10

[Shocked]

The pic is good. OCG is good. Effect not bad. Seems good I think ^.^

8.5/10