JasonX1991 Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Hi all. This is my first Thread and those are my first cards. Please rate it an tell me what I could improve. I hope you'll like it :) PS: Maybe u could make a +/- list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Don't use fake types.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Some are very ovrepowered. is that clown "Eso"? my friend told me about it but i never looked for it, whats that clown?Bad ogc. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I have a BIG question - how come your post shows you only made TWO cards???Where did all THESE come from then???Or you simply deleted them???Bad - this means NO REPAIR... Back on topic.OCG is problematic (as typical for most beginners).Fake types - well, no comments on that...Kamehamehas are all WAY overpowered simply because they don't require ANYTHING to be activated.Unfortunatelly (for OCG) the ONLY cards with "character" descriptions are NORMAL MONSTERS!!! ONLY!!!Btw I just re-read some cards - some English grammar is very confusing.(Eg. "covered" monster - do you mean "equipped" or "face-down" or something else??? I CAN'T tell from your text!!! Though I do think it's face-down...)To be short - your grammar needs to be corrected...5/10 max. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexta McSignals Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 dude don't fake types without saying it first 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 i dont mind fake types, but u need to revise the grammar for these. and some cards are way overpowered like the kamehamehas. and what the hell is a fache? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonX1991 Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 I'm German its normal that some grammar mistakes in there. 20-fache Kaioken (ger) = 20-times Kaioken (eng).I saved the cards on my computer and uploaded them on imageshack.us.I just saved two cards at the cardmaker.And if there Fake-Types whats the matter?I created the cards for fun and not that there gonna win a price for the best layout or content.And the clown is IT, from the novel/movie by Stephen King. Some of the cardnames are german i have to correct that soon.By the way Koshej there are no character description for effect monsters. There is only one for shenlong for a better understanding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaT PeePs Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 good cards man :) ppl take this stuff kinda sersously lol XDi juat make cards i know and enjoy well 7/10 keep up the work :) comment mines :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 I'm German its normal that some grammar mistakes in there. 20-fache Kaioken (ger) = 20-times Kaioken (eng).I saved the cards on my computer and uploaded them on imageshack.us.I just saved two cards at the cardmaker.And if there Fake-Types whats the matter?I created the cards for fun and not that there gonna win a price for the best layout or content.And the clown is IT' date=' from the novel/movie by Stephen King. Some of the cardnames are german i have to correct that soon.By the way Koshej there are no character description for effect monsters. There is only one for shenlong for a better understanding.[/quote'] Truer words have never been spoken.cool cards man 7.5/10and who doesn't know who IT is? Next people will say they never heard of the Dark Tower series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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