killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 There is a lot of problems,#1 pics are bad#2 OCG errors#3OP#4 Why are there ninjas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 its my first damn deck chill out... what is OCG and 3OP?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 OCG = Official Card GrammerOP = Overpowered Advice: Don't EVER curse at someone who is higher rank than you. You'll get neg'd fast or possibly banned.Fix the OCG and Pics, in fact fix everything. Effects need to be more reasonable, pics need to be better, OCG needs fixing, and so does your attitude. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 okay sorry... but what do u mean by "official card grammer??"and neg'd?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 You'll get a negative reputation. See that 26 over there ->? That's a good reputation. If you have a bad reputation it'll be red. Look at a real card and see how it's written out. That's Official Card Grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Ya have to make it sound legit, as if it was made by Upper Deck themselves. ex.The Army. (Should be like XYZ Dragon Cannon or VW Tiger Catapult(whatevs :P))This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card may attack twice during your Battle Phase. The InfantryWhen this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, Special Summon 1 "The Rocketry from your hand or deck to your side of the field. Less overpowered version of "The Infantry" (Effect is like R G Y Gadget)When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, add 1 "The Rocketry from your deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 oh okay thank u guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Advice: Don't EVER curse at someone who is higher rank than you. You'll get neg'd fast or possibly banned.lol Who do you think you are? All those stars mean is that you post a lot. Probably more than you should. "Higher Rank" my ass. Get off your high horse. Edit:@ Original Poster: Hmm... I think that Crystal Ice's advice is the best. If I were to modify these guys would make them a combo of Gladiator Beasts and Gadgets myself. I'll redo the example S/He gave: The ArmyEARTH/8/3300/3000Warrior/Fusion/EffectThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card may attack twice during your Battle Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard it is returned to the Extra Deck instead. The InfantryEARTH/4/1200/1000Warrior/EffectWhen this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, Add 1 "The Rocketry" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 would this be a good example of a card?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Advice: Don't EVER curse at someone who is higher rank than you. You'll get neg'd fast or possibly banned. Oh' date=' shut the hell up. All those stars mean is that you post a lot. Probably more than you should. "Higher Rank" my ass. Get off your high horse.[/quote']Cursing is illegal on the site anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 I know, but it doesn't change the fact that you were acting like a pompous douche.would this be a good example of a card?? That is a pretty good card but in the Realistic Cards section it's best to post cards that have "real" Types such as Warrior and Machine and the like. So this Goddess would most likely be a Fairy monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 again... does this make an okay card?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 The effect could use more balancing the cost and effect per se. The grammar needs work is all... When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, discard 1 or more cards from your hand to Special Summon 1 card from the Graveyard that has "Goddess" in its name with a tribute cost less than or equal to the number of discarded cards in face-up Defense Position. ex. Ya discard 1 card, ya can SS a Lv 1-6, discard two cards, ya can SS a Lv 1-8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Your kinda right. I probably shouldn't have typed the "higher rank" part. I apologize. Now let us end this argument, I find it pointless and it's spam. OT: For teh Goddess of Life: Better. Capitalize the name and here be thy OCG correction: When this card is Summoned, discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 monster with "Goddess" in its card name in face-up Defense Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 thank god...this good?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Okay not all caps. But the OCG is better. Also, don't make fake types. Make it a Fairy or something. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 your goddess card OCG correction is up, and it needs to be fairy type 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 okay 8/10 ill go with that :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Your Army set is dripping in failsauce. Your OCG was off and the pictures weren't yugioh-like pics. HOWEVER... Your "Goddess" card intrigued me. I like the pic, and the effect is interesting. You still have some OCG errors in it, but not nearly as much. Tis a very nice card indeed. You have potential. Just make sure you use correct OCG, ;) Army set: 3.5/10 Goddess: 7.5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa210 Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 lol yeah i know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 again... does this make an okay card?? Not really, capitalizing errors or however you spell it and fake types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Advice: Don't EVER curse at someone who is higher rank than you. You'll get neg'd fast or possibly banned. Rank is stupid. The only people who have any real say are moderators and maybe some members that we deeply respect enough to let them have say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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