§hadow §triker Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 [align=center]This is gonna be for a contestthis contest Here is the card[spoiler=effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from the Graveyard by sending 1 level 7 monster on your side of the field out of play. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard the owner of this card loses half their Life points. If this is not the only monster on your side of the field it has 0 ATK. This card looses 100 ATK points for every card in your hand. If your opponent does not control any monsters, this card cannot attack.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Pic = =O I find it a bit UP'd. It doesn't need so many drawbacks. Take away the 4th sentence and it's good. 8.5/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 well considering it is a lv 5 with 3000 ATK i need a lot of drawbacks, but thnx for the comment. I'll wait for more b4 i change anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 defense mode = Defense Position magic = Spell Not bad, the image is pretty good (just crop out the text) and the OCG is alright. It seems very underpowered though, there really is nothing but negative effects. I would change a few things:-Able to be SS from the Deck -Remove the half the LP cost -Add "face-up" before the Spell and Trap Card effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 the last effect should be removed, it's UPed right now 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Nice pic and Id be intersted to see the other elements if your making em!! Yeah I get the Summoning aint too hard with soo many cards using discard 1 card effects...Just then discard a level 7 monster to summon it ok. then you are just beating yourself up if you have any Spell or Trap Cards when dont you??...lol. the card in your hand aint is good as you have just discarded, and im guessing running a deck that is heavy in discarding your hand nice makes it more realistic for its level compared to ATK points. The only card part is abit heavy too, maybe if there is no monster on your opponents side of the field it cant attack. Its just an idea, but its a new approach and creative which I like alot means you have put some thought into which should be encouraged!!...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 The pic is nice, the OCG needs some change, the effect is a bit UP'd, as mentioned before. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Some OCG errors. But the pic is good. Little UP's. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakashi516 Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 like the piceffect has tomant drawbacks,you may want to scrape one or two but all in all a desent card7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 Nice pic and Id be intersted to see the other elements if your making em!! Yeah I get the Summoning aint too hard with soo many cards using discard 1 card effects...Just then discard a level 7 monster to summon it ok. then you are just beating yourself up if you have any Spell or Trap Cards when dont you??...lol. the card in your hand aint is good as you have just discarded' date=' and im guessing running a deck that is heavy in discarding your hand nice makes it more realistic for its level compared to ATK points. The only card part is abit heavy too, maybe if there is no monster on your opponents side of the field it cant attack. Its just an idea, but its a new approach and creative which I like alot means you have put some thought into which should be encouraged!!...9/10[/quote'] I like your Idea. I may remove the last of the effect as ragnarok suggested and add your idea. thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 No worries happy to help where I can!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 10, 2009 Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 There are OCG errors, the ones that Bengal gave out. Effect is slightly OP but good nonetheless. Pic is pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 it has been updatednow wht to change, if anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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