breann101 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Ok so, I posted a thread about BeyBlade yugioh cards and now im going to post up a different card, because i honstly cant think of anything for the beyblade set. I still dont have a working computer im on one of my freiends computer and its 8 somthing in the morning i got bored waiting for someone to reply to me so i made thisOnce per turn this card will do 500 points of direct damage to your oppoint. Once this card is destroyed you may pay 300 life points to put it back in your deck. I know it needs a lot of work and im not complaning just asking for help from pplz around here again^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 it's ATK/DEF is a little too high for a level 6 monster, i'd take away about 500 ATK/DEF (ATK/2300 DEF/2200)your OCG is a little off, it should probably say;"Inflict 500 damage to your opponent during the End Phase of your turn. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can pay 300 Life Points to return it to your Deck instead."it seems pretty basic to me but i guess its not too bad if you consider my fixes6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 ATK/DEF is too high, and your effect is a little bland. OCG corrections above! 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubblin Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Overpwered and some OCG issues listed already6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 over powered and its effect is just a little...bland, SPICE IT UP! 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 The ATK and DEF is to high. The pic is okay. The OCG has been corrected. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinzoLord Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 jinzolord'bighope hey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 bland effect, also it should be lv8 given its stats 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 jinzolord'bighope hey you just spamed on my threadi know its bland but seeing as how i have littraly none of the new cards, i cant come up with any idea's from the newer decks.i have battle city cards and duelist kingdom cards. thats about it.when i get to a computer again i'll fix the ocg thanx guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaoscontaminater Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Ok so' date=' I posted a thread about BeyBlade yugioh cards and now im going to post up a different card, because i honstly cant think of anything for the beyblade set. I still dont have a working computer im on one of my freiends computer and its 8 somthing in the morning i got bored waiting for someone to reply to me so i made this[img']http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4161/308865.jpg[/img]Once per turn this card will do 500 points of direct damage to your oppoint. Once this card is destroyed you may pay 300 life points to put it back in your deck. I know it needs a lot of work and im not complaning just asking for help from pplz around here again^_^[i say: the 500 points a turn is BS, no offense, but other than that its okay.[php][/php]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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