alrexis Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 This is my first card hope you like it ^_^(sorry for the OP of this card but I think I balanced it)Effect:When this card is on the field remove all non fire element monster on the field to hand. Pay 1000 Life Points for every monster that moved to field to hand by the effect of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Now that effect is just confusing. I don't know what to make of it...OCG needs major work. 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 OCG fix (you need it):While you control this face-up card, return all non-FIRE monsters from the field to their owners' hands. Very simple effect and it is OP. Pic is pretty good though so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 Use the OCG that the worm pointed out. The effect is OP. Reason is that there is no drawback. If it said all monsters then i would consider it balanced. The effect is also bland, try adding more to make it more creative. The pic is ok. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 bad ocg 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2009 Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 simple effect, but without any drawbacks it's WAY too powerful 4.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alrexis Posted September 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 ok I will try my best to balanced it thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vtr47 Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 the ocg needs work, but the name and pic is great 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alrexis Posted September 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 I change the effect of my card by adding a drawback effect ^o^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 New OCG check:While you control this face-up card, return all non-FIRE monsters from the field to their owners' hands. Inflict 1000 points of damage to your Life Points for every monster that is returned to its owners hand by this card's effect. Picture is good, effect is bland... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 effect is bad needs lots of OCGBAD OCG 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Work more on the OCG.. The effect seem confusing >.< 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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