my first card

[madmax28]

hye every body I'm french and i realise some cards for black wings

what do you think about them

 

 

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner

the ATK of this monster is equal of the total ATK of the monsters used for the summon.

once per turn , choose 1 effect:

if you remove a blackwing monster from your cemetery, add to the ATK of deathcrow the monster's ATK remove until the end phase.

discard a monster from your hand to Special Summon a blackwing monster from your graveyard .

 

 

 

This card can be summon only by removing a monster blackwing from the graveyard .

When this card is destroyed during a battle and sent to the graveyard,you can destroy one card Face hidden on your opponent's field and in his hand

 

as long as a blackwin monster other than this card is present on the field ,this card can't be attacked.

Once per turn you can do a Special Summon from your Graveyard of a blackwing monster with level 3 or less. the monster invoked can't be sacrified and loses its effect

 

 

 

 

say me what do you think about my card

thanks

[ragnarok1945]

Black Flight's effect is unimpressive, plenty of other cards can do the same thing if not better

 

your synchro monster's atk determining effect is too powerful, it'll easily exceed the 4000 atk mark

 

7.5/10

[Savior Star Dragon]

uuuhhhhhhh........they're called " Blackwing " not ' Black Wings '

 

 

3/10

 

if you change them ill triple my rating for them k?

[Rook Bishop]

I think the look cool 8/10

[shiko11]

'blackwing' would be correct.

[Neo-MasterX]

OCG fix:DeathCrow

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner

The ATK of this monster is equal of the total ATK of the monsters used for the summon.

Once per turn, choose 1 of the following effects:

2 - Remove a monster including in its name Black Wings from your Graveyard, add that monsters ATK to the DeathCrow until the end phase.

2 - Discard a monster from your hand to Special Summon a monsters including in its name Black Wings from your Graveyard.

 

OCG fix: Heldril

This card cannot be Normal Summoned, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing a monster including Black Wings from your graveyard .

When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard,you can destroy one face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

OCG fix: Nemesa

As long as this card remains on the field, this card can't be choose as an attack target.

Once per turn you Special Summon one LV3 or less monster from your Graveyard including BlackWings in its name. The monster that is Special Summoned by this cards effect cannot be Sacrifice Summoned and its effect is negated.

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some very seriously OCG(Official Card Grammar) errors

6/10

[Shocked]

The names should be Capitalize

 

6/10