[+APA.JG] Celestial Descendant Nibiru

[JG.]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when the total amount of cards in your hand, on your field and in your Graveyard is between 12 and 20. While this card is on the field, if the number of cards in your hand, on your field and in your Graveyard is not between 12 and 20, destroy this card. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, negate the effect and destroy it. During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Stranger Counter on this card. When there are 5 Stranger Counters on this card, you win the duel.

 

First to get the pun gets a rep. It shouldn't be too hard.

 

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[Mehmani]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when the total amount of cards in your hand' date=' on your field and in your Graveyard is between 12 and 20. While this card is on the field, if the number of cards in your hand, on your field and in your Graveyard is not between 12 and 20, destroy this card. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, negate the effect and destroy it. During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Stranger Counter on this card. When there are 5 Stranger Counters on this card, you win the duel.[/i']

 

First to get the pun gets a rep. It shouldn't be too hard.

 

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I do get the pun, but I'm not telling. I'd rather let someone else get it.

 

It's very well made. Perhaps you should make the limit 13-17 so it's harder to win the duel with it.

[JG.]

No, otherwise the pun wouldn't work xD

[ragnarok1945]

for 12 to 20 cards to special summon this, not sure if Exchange of the Spirit is the best way to make it happen. And the instant win effect for 5 counters on this card seems to over compensate for this, along with you forgot to say the max number of counters it can hold

 

Maybe say when you have 5 counters on this card, it'll inflict 2000 pts of damage to your opponent during EACH player's standby phase

 

8/10

[JG.]

No, because once it has 5 counters, you win the duel, so there's no need for a maximum.

[ragnarok1945]

yeah, but I felt instant win effect like that is too powerful

[JG.]

Think about it, it's hard to keep it out for 5 of your Standby Phases, stats aren't teh best, and it's destroyed if teh limit is exceeded.

[Mehmani]

I think it doesn't need much editing, it's fine already. Maybe perhaps the 12-20 limit should be decreased to 13-18 or something.

[~Oleon~]

Way way way way way way WAY too Overpowered. Instant win? But it does make it a bit harder with the numbers of handsize and everything. Well, I suppose so. Because of the overpowered effect, I give this card 7/10. Good job. I normally don't give people over 5/10 because I always have packs of harsh criticism lol. Anyway, it's a good card, and I think you have a knack for this kinda thing.

TIP: I always give tips, so heres yours. Instant win bonus seems a bit too good for that. I mean, if you have 12 cards altogether then you can summon it, 5 turns late you win. I'd say make it 8 Stranger counters to win. That way you have to start it when you have 12, and gives the opponent more time, so it's a sort of drawback. Well, there's my advice, PS: I have made a new set of cards:

THE SPACIAL COMMAND SET. Look out for them, theyre good cards.

That's all I have to say...

Oleon out.

[JG.]

Don't advertise your cards in other people threads. And it's pretty hard to keep it at that limit for 5 whole of your turns, with the curent meta.

[JG.]

Bump.