CnoE123 Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 I wanna make more comment plz XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Very good pic, good effect, but OCG errors. "Normal Summon, not normal summon, I believe monsters in a card effect are put in quotations "***". Instead of lifepoints, you can just say LP. "When this monster is destroyed by battle" should be "When this card is destroyed by battle".(Don't ask me why)Finally, it's level 4 or lower, not under, and it's Warrior-type, not "Warrior" Type. Then again, I could be wrong, but I don't think so. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToxicLatte Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Awesome! Great pic too! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkandzel Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 nice now i want to see the Rinoa card:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Best card ever, no. But it's not bad. I like the pic though, but a can't really comment on the effect until I see Rinoa. Some minor OCG errors, but they aren't too bad. Mostly just capitalization errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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