First Card

[Dakrworld]

 

First time doing this Plz rate

[Eury]

Pic is good but this card is overpowered even with the Summoning cost. And no fake types please. 5/10

[KuroKibo]

Picture is good, it's nice for me, but Demon is a fake type; try use Warrior instead.

 

You typed the DEF wrong, it's not 0000 but it's 0.

 

For the descriptions, capitalize the 'Special', 'Summon', 'Summoned', 'Set', and 'Normal'. Also write 'Atk' as 'ATK'.

As for the effect, it's overpowered, like davidroof1 said. Also, if you said 'Graveyard' as a tribute, say it as 'Removing' not 'Tributing'. And you need to either decrease the increasment of ATK for the effect or use less Attributes or Types for the cards affected.

 

Overall, for a first card, it's good. Just overpowered.

5.8/10

[ragnarok1945]

demon isn't a real type, change it to fiend, and the effect is WAY too powerful anyway

 

7/10

[ĎλЯклξššζ]

Its good.......... OP'd yes but good (for a first card).................. 8/10.............

[Lexadin]

I agree with those above.

[Lord Ursus]

I agree with those above.

Me too, lol.

 

Take a look at the OCG thread. I'm sure you'll improve your OCG by doing so.

 

Names has bolds at the beginning of each part, with the exceptions of "of" "the" and "and", except of course, if it's the first letter of the name. It may be more exceptions, but that's all I can think of as for the moment.

 

Good card for your first, I'll give you that. :)

 

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