maltez Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Its a fairly good card for a newb I guess, but there are some major OCG errors. try rephrasing it like this, "Once per turn by paying 300 Life Points, return a FIRE Monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed during your End Phase, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase by reducing this card´s ATK by half," but even with those fixes its still hard to understand, like how would it get destroyed during your End Phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Work more on the OCG. Don't capitalize all the name. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 OCG correction is already up you'd have to get it destroyed yourself during the end phase, and that's not easy 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackHaloRose Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 I think you pay Life Points equal to half of his ATK points. I also think he meant, destroyed by the End Phase, you can activate the effect.But that would require confirmation from the creator, so that's just speculation. Also if what I think is correct, it would be pretty hard to get rid of the dragon. And if it's what was previously mentioned, Then that effect will rarely go off if ever. All suggestions were already given that I would have given.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 pretty nice for a new member,:d but many OCG errors :twisted:7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 very good for a newbie.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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