aills Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Hey this is my first card ive created can you guys give me any constructive critisism. Many thanks and hope you enjoy. :D This Card can be Special Summoned from your hand by removing from play 3 DARK Monster Cards in your Graveyard. If this Card is Tribute Summoned Successfully you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.Image Source - Fiboy (Deviantart) (I apologise if theres any OCG errors and hope you can help me fix them if there is :) ) EDIT: Changes to "Possesed Warrior - Lord Darkseeker" 's effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 First sentence = This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by removing from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Not bad, the image is alright and the OCG is decent. It seems overpowered though, I would add a Level limit to the SS monster. Also, maybe make the SS cost 3 monsters instead of 2, because some DARK monsters are meant to be removed from play. Pretty good for your first card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aills Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Thanks that means a lot from such a skilled creator as yourself. :) I'll apply the changes you suggest. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 It's a bit OP'ed, but it's still good for be your first card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 a little OPed, I'd make it so you can't normal summon this card as well 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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