maltez Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 I don't understand the effect, what should it do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 think it will be destroyed but you can summon it back (?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 For the first sentence it should be something like When this card attacks one of your opponent's monsters it is destroyed during the end phase. At any rate it's still too powerful (it doesn't even have specific summoning requirements) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 If this is your first card, it's amazing. a few pointers: OP (over powered) it should be 3000 of in the high 2000. effect is a tad bit confusing. What should it do?post the lore under the card.(it's easyer on the eyes)only first letter in it's name should be capital, Arceus DragonName: ok, Im not shure Arceus is used anywere else other then pokemon. If im wrong, just punch me 8.5/10 but if it's your first, its quite good. (better then my first:)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 It is OP, add some drawbacks to balance it. Their are quite a few OCG errors which make it hard to know what it is doing. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 what he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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