Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 [align=center]Alpha Cyber X-19 Confuse Maker Lore : This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing 2 Machine-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, all of your opponent's monster on the field also treated as Machine-Type. During your Main Phase, place Confuse Counter (max. 2). When this card destroys a Machine-Type, place Confuse Counter (max. 3). When this card is destroyed by a battle, destroy all Machine-Type (except this card). When this card is destroyed by a Trap/Spell Card, inflict damage to opponent;s Life Points equal to number of placed Confuse counter x300. Image Credit : SuperCheesy / Maliki DeVile[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 good card, but you must change OCG, it's pretty bad but like the pic, though the name is mjae.. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 When this card is destroyed by a battle, destroy all Machine-Type (except this card). (This effect is a bit oped)OCG has minor mistakes, Other than that unique effect 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Where's the OCG error? Please explain, I want to fixed it ^.^ BTW, thanks your you opinions ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, all of your opponent's monster on the field is also treated as Machine-Type monsters. During your Main Phase, place Confuse Counter (max. 2)on what?. When this card destroys a Machine-Type, place Confuse Counter (max. 3) on what? . When this card is destroyed by a battle, destroy all Machine-Type monsters on the field (except this card). When this card is destroyed by an effect of a Trap or Spell Card, inflict damage to opponent;s Life Points equal to number of placed Confuse Counters x300.Like I said, minor ones ^.^ :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Wow, many OCG error. Okay, if I have a time, i will fix it. Thanks ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metalflygon08 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 how can there be a max of 2 counters, but later it becomes a max of 3? unless the counters are going to different monsters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 The counters are going to same monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Wow' date=' many OCG error. Okay, if I have a time, i will fix it. Thanks ^.^[/quote'] Anytime :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Not bad. Unique effect.(^_^)8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted September 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 I'd remove the effect of when it's destroyed in battle it'll destroy all machine type monsters on the field since you could end up nuking your opponent's side of the field too easily this way 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Well some one used my image I think this card is unique from many machine types I like it very much 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Love the pic, few OCG errors, nice effect, name's a bit weird.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Not bad, but the effect is a bit hard to understand. It is kind of random, maybe remove the part that says "During your Main Phase....". I would also change the second sentence to: "While you control this face-up card,....". That you remove the fact that all of your opponent's monsters would be destroyed when this card is, just to balance it out. I think you could also change 300 to 500. A decent burn effect, and could be good support for Perfect Machine King. I like the image too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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