Chicada Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Well, here it is. Didn't wanna keep you waiting, wait.... i'm making you wait... Arrgghh!!!!! Lore: When this card is summoned to the field, place one counter on it (max. 5). Once per turn, you can place one more counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, destroy the monster that battled with this card and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for every counter on this card. oh yeah... PLz rate thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 OCG fix: "When this card is Summoned, place 1 Counter on it (max. 5). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, place 1 Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, send the attacking monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Counters on this card x500." Not a bad card, in fact it has a pretty good burn effect. Although the OCG isn't the best, and the image is of the Balrog (or however it is spelled). It seems a bit overpowered too, I would remove the part about destroying the attacking monster. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 impressive burn effect, though I wouldn't add the effect of destroying the attacking monster as well unless you give it a drawback to with it 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 The OCG is already up. The effect itself is quite a nice one with a good burn effect, maybe add a drawback as ragnorok said. The pic though, is from Lord of the Rings 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 good effect and the name matches the picture 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Balrog strikes :P Nice ;) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 thx. i will fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Take away destroying the attacking monster, and it's an awesome effect.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sub-Zero999 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 its a really good card man i like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonwendy Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Nice burn effect. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 Ok..... i edited it. Lore: When this card is summoned to the field, place one counter on it (max. 5). Once per turn, you can place one more counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove it from play and inflict damage to your opponent for every counter on this card x500. how is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 yeah now it looks much better since the most burn you can get out of it is only 2500 so I'll raise the rate to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 OCG fix: "When this card is Summoned' date=' place 1 Counter on it (max. 5). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, place 1 Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, send the attacking monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Counters on this card x500." Not a bad card, in fact it has a pretty good burn effect. Although the OCG isn't the best, and the image is of the Balrog (or however it is spelled). It seems a bit overpowered too, I would remove the part about destroying the attacking monster. 7.5/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 YES!!!!!! A 9.5 from.... RAGNAROK!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!! highest rate ever...... i thinkI fixed it Makille Deville just so ya know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 another few cards here ya go!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 OCG fix: "When this card is Summoned' date=' place 1 Counter on it (max. 5). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, place 1 Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, send the attacking monster to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Counters on this card x500." Not a bad card, in fact it has a pretty good burn effect. Although the OCG isn't the best, and the image is of the Balrog (or however it is spelled). It seems a bit overpowered too,[b'] I would remove the part about destroying the attacking monster. [/b] 8.5/10Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 I EDITED IT CHECK BELOW FIRST ONE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PAGE SO IGNORE THE FIRST ONEBY THE WAY, HOW'S MY NEW CARDS RATE THOSE TOO PLEASE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Really needs a drawback and the OCG is unimpressive. The pic is EPIN though so 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 "EPIN"???? ya mean epic, i think, anyway, thanks for tha ratin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghislain the arcangel Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 cool cards, better than mine in fact, :cry: you get 10/10 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 nice card, but thepic is a Balrog from Lotr.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief13 Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 nice pic where'd ya get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 so what the picture is from lotr? I got it from google.Masterchief 13, what's your rate? Thanks for the 10/10!!! ghislain!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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