♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 [align=center]I think I'm going to make this a fun little structure deck but I'll have to wait to see if I can find good pictures for the set before I decide. Anyways I hope you enjoy! MONSTERS[spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by sending 3 "Bronze Life" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to place 1 Bronze Counter on this card (max. 9). During each of your Main Phases, you can remove any number of Bronze Counters from this card to increase this card's ATK by the number of Bronze Counters removed x100 until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 2 "Bronze Life" monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. If this card is destroyed by a DARK monster, your opponent card add 2 DARK monsters from their Graveyard to their Deck. Their Deck is then shuffled. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, reduce the ATK of all other "Bronze Life" monsters to 100. When this effect is activated, your opponent takes damage equal to the number of "Bronze Life" monsters you control x 200. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls for every other "Bronze Life" monster you control. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card is also treated as a Fariy-Type monster. Once per turn, if this card has 3 or more Bronze Counters on it, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Bronze Life" monster from your Graveyard. When this effect is activated your opponent gains Life Points equal to this cards DEF. If this card's effect is activated while it is in face-up Defense Position, this card is returned to your hand during your next End Phase. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can place 1 Bronze Counter on any card you control. This card cannot be sent directly to the Graveyard from your hand. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:"Bronze Life - Lithum, Aquarian Seaguard" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, your opponent takes damage equal to this cards DEF. When this effect is activated you must Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Bronze Life" monster from your Graveyard. Your opponent can Special Summon 1 Level 4 monster from their hand to the field in face-up Attack Position. If this card is face-up on the field while you control "Bronze Life - Voyage, Valkyrie of Life" you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 2 cards your opponent controls. This card is removed from play during the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. This card may be uber OP. I tried to balance it as best I could. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card cannot be removed from the field except by the effect of a Spell Card. This card gains 200 ATK for each Fairy-Type monster you control. When this card is used to Synchro Summon a "Bronze Life" monster, you can place 3 Bronze Counters on any card you control. [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, your opponent draws 1 card. You can draw 2 cards and select and activate 1 of the following effects:-Pay 250 Life Points. If 1 card drawn is a Monster Card, you can discard that card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.-Pay 250 Life Points. If 1 card drawn is a Spell Card, you can discard that card to destroy 1 Spell Card your opponent controls.-Pay 250 Life Points. If 1 card drawn is a Trap Card, you can discard that card to destroy a Trap Card your opponent controls.During you opponent's next Draw Phase., you must discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do not, this card loses 300 ATK. SPELLS[spoiler=Effect]-Effect:Equip only to a monster with 1100 ATK or lower. The equipped monster is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster. The equipped gains 100 ATK x the number of Bronze Counters on the field (max. 9). [spoiler=Effect]-Effect:This card can only be activated by revealing it to your opponent while it is in your hand. This card must remains in your hand. As long as this card is in your hand, your opponent draws 1 extra card during their Draw Phase. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Level 5 or higher "Bronze Life" monster from your field from play, to Special Summon 1 "Bronze Life" monster from your Graveyard with a Level equal to or lower then the Level of the monster removed from play, in face-up Attack Position. During each of your End Phases, you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, your opponent gains Life Points equal to half the total ATK of all face-up "Bronze Life" monsters you control. I'm not sure about this cards OCG^ if you think theres something off just say so (I think it may be a tad OP) But I think this will go on my top most unique effects list ^^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 wow amazing pic card is really cool 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 ty and updated ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 wow i love the pics on these cards this update is really cool where did you find the pics im assuming devianart my rate stays the same 10/10 maybe you can rate my warriors on here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 your Bronze Life Valkyrie does the effect of removing counters seem not all that useful as you remove them during the End Phase yet the effect only lasts till the End Phase of the turn you remove them??? Am I reading the card wrong or does the increase in ATK points all finish during the same Phase of the same turn!?? If so whats the points in the effect?? Like the pic and the idea of the effect. Is the monster she Synchros with coming along soon?? Like the Synchro effects nice simple...there are sometimes the best I think and the pic very nice. But why if she is Frost and the pic is very Blue is she a WIND attribute monster, shouldnt she be a WATER type...just my opinion of course. 8.5/10 Nice Work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Card1: Well the most you can gain is 900 atk, which isn't much for 1 turn. Your 2nd effect for this is a little OPed, maybe give your opponent something in return for getting two monsters back to your deck Card2: Oh that's just great, the moment you summon it, it'll be reduced to a 100 atk weakling, and the most you can burn your opponent is only 1000 anyway. I suggest you change the effect to say when it's synchro summoned, reduce ALL OTHER bronze life monsters you control to 100 atk 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sanctuary Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 cool cards. how do i post my cards for others to see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 hey thefranchise1719 what you do is once you have made a card click on the card picture to the right and ounder neath a code will pop up. Go to the right Section and at the top it says new Topic, give your thread (its the same thing as topic, but thats what it referd to on here) place the code in the thread and maybe add a few words explaining the card etc and post it..and magic itll appear. hope it helps send me a message if you need any help. but try not to ask questions in other peoples threads, as there is a section for that kind of thing. But Lovely Lady is a sweetie so I dont think she will mind too much...Do you darlin!?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I WOULD NEVER RATE THESE CARDS 10/10! ... Why settle for 10 when you can have 20/10! XDEpic cards. Would like to see more. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 lol thanks all and no Abbaton ^^' lol i wasnt thinking when i but during the end phase I'll change it to Main Phase (and ill make her water ^^ *The Synchro*) Rag - I'll fix its effect ^^ thanks for pointing that out :3 and yes itll be all other ^^ thanks all for the rates Edit: Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Very good cards. Balanced effects and good pics. OCG is perfect.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Thats ok sugar n spice!! I honnestly thought I did get what the effect was trying to do, thought my brain had melted or something lol!! Like I said its your choice I just thought it was a little strange she was a WIND attribute but ignore me if you wanna keep her as she is darling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 lol well I thought about making her aqua type but wind attribute but then i decided to make her a water spellcaster but i forgot to change the attribute ^^ lol but thanks :3 Edit: Another Card Added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 lol thanks all and no Abbaton ^^' lol i wasnt thinking when i but during the end phase I'll change it to Main Phase (and ill make her water ^^ *The Synchro*) Rag - I'll fix its effect ^^ thanks for pointing that out :3 and yes itll be all other ^^ thanks all for the rates Edit: Updated glad to see you took my advice, I'll now raise the rate to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Yay =D!!! Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Wow. just wow. epic great cards ideas ~9.7/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 =3 thanks! Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 only the last card's effect of summoning any Bronze Life monster to the field from the graveyard by simply removing a lv5 or higher bronze life monster from your field is a little OPed, since the special summoned monster can be any level. Which is why I recommend you say the special summoned monster can only remain on the field for 3 turns or something 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 That works ^^ lol i've had these images for like months I cant believe I havent used them yet lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 yeah well you DID say you had been busy, I think that's a reasonable excuse there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 lol yup...I was thinking if making it say "to Special Summon 1 "Bronze Life" monster from your Graveyard, with the same Level as the Tributed monster" would balance it...what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I would say with less than or equal to the level for greater flexibility, unless you think that'd make it too Oped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I think thats great! Changing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 glad to hear that, I'll now raise the rate to 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 yay ^^ ty New Card Added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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