Blablafodfpå Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Here you go: [spoiler=Card here, With changes.] [spoiler=Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monstersWhen this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent half of the destroyed monsters DEF."If this card is the only face-up monster you control, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Deck." Rate, don't just say : OCG Errors.None..? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 3/5 He doesn't need the effect of summoning a Lvl 3 from the deck. That effect will be abused by monarchs (summon a 3, tribute for monarch, bounce the monarch next turn and do it again) The pic doesn't look good on the synchro background. Too much white for the eyes to handle. Effect isn't that original... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 Last sentence: "If this card is the only face-up monster you control, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Deck." Not bad, the image is alright, although there is text in the corner, and the OCG is fine. While not the most original effect, it seems relatively balanced. I would lower the ATK though, the effect is a bit too much for it to have 3000 ATK. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 7.5/10, pretty balanced, but with another image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 I like the pic. The effect is pretty good. OCG needs a bit of work.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2009 Report Share Posted September 21, 2009 for the 2nd effect you might want to say the lv3 monster can't be used for tribute or synchro summon that turn and you'll be good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blablafodfpå Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Uhm i Guess.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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