My first cards of my reaper set

[Magnet Soldier]

here they are.

please post advice if you have any.

 

 

Lore:This card is also treated as a FIRE attribute. This card is unaffected by your opponents spells or traps. Increase this cards ATK by 400 for every 'reaper' monster on the field and 200 ATK & DEF for every FIRE or DARK attribute monster on the field. When this card destroys a monster by battle inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents life points and increase your life points by the same amount.

 

 

lore:This card is also treated as a FIRE attribute. While this card is on the field you may discard one card from your hand to summon one Lv4 or lower 'Reaper' monster from your graveyard.

 

 

Lore:This card is also treated as a FIRE attribute. This card is unaffected by your opponents effect monster's effects. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every effect monster on the field. When this card is sent to the graveyard destroy all effect monsters on your opponents side of the field and send them to the graveyard.

 

 

This card is also treated as a FIRE attribute. When this card is destroyed by battle special summon a Lv4 or lower DARK, FIRE Atribute monster or a 'Reaper' monster.

 

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing 3 dark or fire type monsters on your side of the field. This card is also treated as a fire attribute. This card is also treated as a zombie type. This card gains 1000 Atk points for every fire or dark attribute monster in your graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card battles you can tribute this card to inflict half your life points to both you and your opponents life points.

 

 

This card is also treated as a FIRE attribute. When this card is summoned or flipped face up you may select one monster on the field. This card can attack twice during the same turn. Decrease the ATK of that monster by 400 points every end phase. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard you may remove it from play to special summon a monster with 'reaper' in it's name from your graveyard.

[Bubblin]

Some are overpowered mainly the first two

but there are some nice pics and ideas

OCG needs improving

[Big Lez]

Just some little tips, for a better OCG ;)

 

Use: This card's Attribute is also treated as FIRE (for example).

summoned = Summoned

special;fusion;synchro;ritual summon= Special; Fusion; Synchro; Ritual Summon

DONT say points ;) Just say "Increase the ATK by 200" (for example)

face up = face-up

 

end phase , standby phase ... = (all Phases!) End Phase , Standby Phase ...

also capitalize : life points > Life Points & tributing > Tributing

 

 

now..Your a 2 star member with quite nice ideas & good artworks

YOur OCG need work, but thats no problem ;)

 

8/10

[Magnet Soldier]

Thanks both of you. Anyone else please post.

[BIG ROD]

i lik em but they r a bit to op'd

[Zauls]

Some are OP. The OCG is off. Some of the pics are bad but I like the first card's pic.

7/10

[Magnet Soldier]

Thanks I think

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By the way what does BUMP mean?

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Thanks I think

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By the way what does BUMP mean?

 

Please! Can someone please tell me what bump means(and rate while your at it)!

[ragnarok1945]

half the cards have not strong enough drawbacks or none at all, which makes them OPed, you can use the OCG thread to help you on the OCG

 

still, you're new so this gets 8.1/10

[Magnet Soldier]

What does BUMP stand for? I feel like im missing something.

[Magnet Soldier]

Heres my new reaper card

 

 

AND COME ON SOME ONE TELL ME WHAT THE HELL BUMP MEANS!!!!!!!!!!

[ragnarok1945]

Reaper of the Wind shouldn't have that atk boosting ability, at least not by that much

 

7.7//10