Darkness Deck!!!!!!

[zexion888]

hi i know im a noob and in your eyes these cards probably suck, but plzzzzzzz just stick to constructive criticism, not being mean )=:

Demon of the Depths effect:This monster can only be summoned with the ritual card "Deep Sea Darkness".

As long as this card is on the field, you must select one card from your graveyard to remove from play every turn. If there are no cards in your graveyard, this card is removed from play. This monster also loses 100 ATK for every card on the field.

[assanaut]

bad grammar, confusing effects, and the oddball of the group: Demon of the Depths. First off, why is this a sea serpent-type monster in a "darkness" set? Second, why give him a debilitating effect like Jirai Gumo or Goblin Attack Force? You should either lower is ATK or raise its level to 9. Pertaining to "Possessed Plant", why would I want to discard it? What would I possibly gain from it being in there besides D.A.D. or Dark Creator? Bad grammar, bad effects, but, hey, this is your first time, so you cards will be "rough around the edges". Don't expect sympathy, though. 4/10.

[Yellow13]

Great Darkness set, and isnt that the Karate Man pic at the one at the bottom post? And uhm..Racism? ROFL

[Zauls]

Very bad OCG on all the cards. They don't go together as a set erally, they just look like random cards to me. Pics are pretty bad as well.

5/10