Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 These cards are a sample of my new Cybernetic archetype for my Work-in-Progress booster pack Final Effort (FNEF). [1 Machine Tuner + 1 or more Non Tuner Monsters]This card is also treated as a Warrior Type. If "Cybernetic Synchron" was used as a Synchro Material Monster, increase this card's attack by 500. This card's attack cannot be negated by any other card effect. If this card would be send to the Graveyard by the effect of a Trap Card during the Battle Phase, negate the effect and send this card to the Graveyard at the end of the Damage Step. A very simple but very helpful effect that can counter cards like Nightmare Steelcage, Swords of Revealing Light and Sakuretsu Armor somewhat. EDIT! Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by your opponent's attack, you can make the attack a Direct attack. NOTE: Workshop is supposed to be a Field Spell >_< You may Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 face-up "Cybernetic Soldier" you control. If this monster destroys one of your opponent's monsters by battle, it can attack again. This monster cannot attack directly after activating this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Nightmare Steelcage and Swords of Revealing Light are Spell Cards, pic is good, effect is good, some OCG errors, good card it's helpful against Mirror Force. what picture do you need? I can find a good one for you 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 OCG fix: 1 Machine-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card is also treated as Warrior-Type. If "Cybernetic Synchron" is used as a Synchro Material Monster for the Synchro Summon of this card, it gains 500 ATK. This card is unaffected by Monster Card Effects. If this card would be send to the Graveyard by the effect of a Trap Card during the Battle Phase, negate the effect and send this card to the Graveyard at the end of the Damage Step. Not bad, the image is alright and it fits the name, and the OCG is kind of hard to word. The effect is essentially simple, and verging on being overpowered, but I think it is alright. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 for "This card can attack regardless of any other card effect.", I think it should be "This card's attack cannot be negated by a card effect." 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 very interesting, the effect looks good, some OCG errors8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Nightmare Steelcage and Swords of Revealing Light are Spell Cards' date=' pic is good, effect is good, some OCG errors, good card it's helpful against Mirror Force. what picture do you need? I can find a good one for you 8/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate! I'm looking for "a wimpy looking robot with a sword" essentially. Sort of like a junk synchron with a sword, a less sophisticated-looking robot than Cybernetic Swordsman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Interesting I'll give you that. Seems slightly (very slight though) overpowered. Nice job. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Nightmare Steelcage and Swords of Revealing Light are Spell Cards' date=' pic is good, effect is good, some OCG errors, good card it's helpful against Mirror Force. what picture do you need? I can find a good one for you 8/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate! I'm looking for "a wimpy looking robot with a sword" essentially. Sort of like a junk synchron with a sword, a less sophisticated-looking robot than Cybernetic Swordsman.Maybe this one:[spoiler=Picture] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Alright! I edited Cybernetic Swordsman and added Cybernetic Synchron, but I couldn't really think of a decent effect for him though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Nice pics! Nice Machines! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Some minor OCG errors. Teh pics and effects are good.8/10 great for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks for the ratings, guys! Glad you like! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 BUMP! Added more cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 it's been a while since you updated, what new cards you added? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 love the pictures 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 it's been a while since you updated' date=' what new cards you added?[/quote'] Everything after Cybernetic Synchron. I'm gonna add Cybernetic Soldier, Scout, Fusion-tek Workshop, Fusion Cutter and Scout Soldier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 in that case the only real one that's not very good as of this moment is your vanilla for having only ONE spell/trap support, you should give it more 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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