gigy7123 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 omg finally first card have to say thanks to casmy you rock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Welcome to the forums! I hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, about the card: 1. The image is okay, but it's just making out what the monster actually looks like. That, and try not to include any url or words in the image, unless it's intentional.2. "dark" is not a Type, but an Attribute. Most DARK monsters are either Fiend or Zombie, so I would suggest you call it as one of those two.3. The effect is a bit too unoriginal, and is also a bit too overpowered. Here is a fixed version of your effect:"This card gains 100 ATK for every DARK monster you control."But I would give it more of a new and not-so-generic effect to make it actually stand out.4. Stats are okay for its Level, do no problem there. Overall, it's good for a first card. There are just a couple of things that are necessary to change, but it's better than most first cards i've seen. 5/10. Well done. If you need any help with any more cards, you can PM me. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gigy7123 Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 thanks for the pointers starly now that think of my effect is kinda bland ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief13 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 nice card but next time try for better OCG. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr.octagonapus6969 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 pretty sweet 8.5/10 but you really should fix the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Dark is a Fake-Type, but it isn't bad7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks, man:D. Nice image 9/10Good, pretty good effect 8.5/10 GOOD JOB! On your first Card!:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 well done dude :D9/10 dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Needs a lot of work. OCG is bad. Effect is too simple. Pic isn't the best. You'll be good one day, but right now...3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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