Phanax Leminer Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 *Phanax is resting on the beach, while Aiku is making sand castles.* Phanax: Sighs... that's so great. Realxing and doing anything, the paradise itself.Aiku: Yup... ? *Aiku digs a bit in teh sand and found a little green snake.* Aiku: Hey! A worm!Worm: Nigigi!Phanax: Aiku, put it back into where you found it.Aiku: No! He looks kinda delicious.Worm: ! MAMA! PAPA!Aiku and Phanax: Mama? Papa? *A giant storm appeared and two huge, huge, HUGE sea serpents come out of the ocean.* Aiku: UO3OPhanax: *facepalms* You really don't know when to keep it shut are you? [align=center]Nigigi, the Mother Ocean's Child LORE:When you Normal Summon 1 Sea Serpent-Type monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is remove from the field, remove it from play instead. Naga-Tsumigono, the Mother Ocean LORE:"Nigigi, the Mother Ocean's Child" + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monstersDuring your Main Phase 1, you can Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to the Graveyard to destroy up to 2 monsters with the same Level as the Tributed monster. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When you control 1 "Naga-Tsunagoma, the Father Ocean", you can Tribute this card to return all Spell and Trap cards to their owner's Deck. Naga-Tsunagoma, the Father Ocean LORE: "Nigigi, the Mother Ocean's Child" + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monstersOnce per turn, you can discard 2 WATER monsters to destroy 2 cards on the field. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When you control 1 "Naga-Tsumigono, the Mother Ocean", you can Tribute this card to return all monsters to their owner's hand, except "Naga-Tsumigono, the Mother Ocean".[/align] EDIT!!!: BIG changes on both Mother and added Father in the family! Put a bit more thoughts on it, since I was encourage by your comments! Thank you all! ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Awesome cards dude, why don't ya make a father, well just an extra card? Anyways, this deserves a 9.2/10 for greatness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Pretty good but 2nd card's pic is a bit blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 well balanced effects, now just add the rest of the family for us to see 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 When I read your critique, Phanax, I always get this feeling you are some pro card maker. You rate to extreme harshness, cards I'd give 7.5/10 for, you give less than 2. Only now, when I really see how you make cards, I find you are just a sham who wants attention. That's a bit harsh by me... Not a bad card nonetheless, but I really expected more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 To Turboss:Thank you, maybe I'll to it... later. To Koramore:Thank you for your comment, but I don't see the blurry unfortunately. To Ragnarok:Thanks Ragnarok! But I'll think how I can do the rest of the family... later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 these are great!9.5/10[Or P=Perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 When I read your critique' date=' Phanax, I always get this feeling you are some pro card maker. You rate to extreme harshness, cards I'd give 7.5/10 for, you give less than 2. Only now, when I really see how you make cards, I find you are just a sham who wants attention. That's a bit harsh by me... Not a bad card nonetheless, but I really expected more.[/quote'] That is true, I critic harshly, but did I ever mention that I was a pro at card making? Not to my memory at least. I also want to point out that my attentions aren't to attract people or becoming popular or even get attention, but to tell how I see fit in my quotes and personal opinions. If I get the attention of people, it's because my critics are doing effect on them, that's pretty much all. You also don't need to be harsh, mostly on me. Critics takes the critics of the people they critic on, that's one of my ways of living. Therefore, I want to thank you, you to say your opinion on my cards and telling how really you fell. Make me glad that I'm negotiating with interresting people.Thank you Bagon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Not really my favorite thread =/ First card:Good, pretty common for a Tuner. Second Card:Seems very strong. The balancer is not good. Overall, this just seems pretty common for a synchro and turner. The Tuner is ok, the Synchro is just..=/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thank you for your comments C-2, I'll take good note of this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mandalores Fury Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 ok: first card, fairly good except you have "It" in the wrong spot. second card: excellent if slightly hard to see. 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks Fury, I'll correct that immeadiately.New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Thank you for your comments C-2' date=' I'll take good note of this.[/color'] Lol, no need to be so formal, ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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